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WrenArrington posted this thread...
Jun. 10, 2013 at 2:09 pm

I think we all know how this works, right? Let me know which of your works (up to three) you want me to rate/comment on, and then go do an equal number of mine, whichever ones catch your eye. I try to give detailed feedback rather than just saying "This is good." Generally I end up suggesting at least one thing that could be improved, and I hope you'll do the same for me. Let the games begin!

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kikixkupkake replied...
Jun. 11, 2013 at 1:12 pm

I'm in, you pick what three of mine. I could really use some constructive criticism, and am hoping to get my poetry up there. Don't forget to rate!

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ZeroDarkFlirty replied...
Jun. 11, 2013 at 5:23 pm

As a new member of this site, I only have one work posted (Ships in the Night) but nevertheless, I would appreciate some feedback on it. I'll get right to reviewing yours in the meantime. Thanks in advance!

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WrenArrington replied...
Jun. 11, 2013 at 9:47 pm

Done and done. Thanks, you two :)

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Jun. 12, 2013 at 12:37 am

I have been frustrated with Teen Ink in the past couple of days because my username has been present inconsistently. So, in case it doesn't, I'm crayola_green and I'd love it if you checked out my poem Crayola Colors. It's a bit long, so I will be reading a couple of your articles to be fair :)

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RozaAlexander replied...
Jun. 12, 2013 at 4:34 pm

Easy, i only specifically i want you to look at, unobtainable, but you can choose whatever other poems you want, its just that unobtainable is newest one so im hopping for good things, its one my personal favorites.

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WrenArrington replied...
Jun. 12, 2013 at 6:14 pm

RozaAlexander, I've rated/commented on Unobtainable, as well as A Silent Death and Wondering.

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PhoenixCrossing replied...
Jun. 12, 2013 at 11:20 pm

I'll check out your work right now! Can you read and critique my poem Rest Softly on Angel Wings and my satire essay Transforming Your Weight Problem Into $3 Million For Dummies? Thanks!

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WrenArrington replied...
Jun. 13, 2013 at 7:57 am

PhoenixCrossing, I have just done your two pieces. Pleasure doing business with ya ;)

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WrenArrington replied...
Jun. 13, 2013 at 8:08 am

Note: Please remember to rate as well as comment. Thank you, that will be all :P

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BlackbeltJamesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 15, 2013 at 5:07 pm

Hey, I've commented and rated three of your poems, I'd appreciate it if you could do the same for my three poems. Thanks :)

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WrenArrington replied...
Jun. 16, 2013 at 10:51 am

I have upheld my side of the bargain, James. Thanks for the comments.

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idkgoawaylol replied...
Jun. 16, 2013 at 7:17 pm

I just got an account so I only have one article. Thanks in advance!

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WrenArrington replied...
Jun. 17, 2013 at 9:22 am

Looks like it isn't up yet, but I'll check back on your page in a couple days and rate/comment then.

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WrenArrington replied...
Jun. 21, 2013 at 12:28 pm

No other takers? C'mon, people, I'm bored and need something to do :P

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Jun. 21, 2013 at 12:44 pm

Oh Thanks, I'd love it if you gave THAT kind of feedback for some of mine. How about hmm... Um, could you read "What she's worth", "The Four-Letter Word" and "A Poetess, I?".. If you like you could read whichever other title catches your eye... I'll definitely read yours. And try to give some honest feedback. But forgive me if the quality of criticism isn't too great. Regards.

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ZeroDarkFlirty replied...
Jun. 21, 2013 at 6:13 pm

Hey Wren, I have a new work uploaded, "Mirrored Walls." Everyone who's read it so far said it was awesome, so maybe that could strike your fancy. I'll be sure to review another one of your articles in compensation.

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WrenArrington replied...
Jun. 21, 2013 at 9:13 pm

Saphira and Zero, I have checked out your stuff :)

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cowgirl4everThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 27, 2013 at 8:14 pm

Please check out my poem, "Beauty Marks," in this forumn. I'll check out a poem of yours!

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StarlitSunriseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 28, 2013 at 11:18 am

I have just commented on and rated your poems, Vermilion, Thorn, and Pulse. I would be very appreciative if you could do the same for three of mine. :) Feel free to take a look at whatever catches your eye. ^.^

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