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KrasotaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Jun. 7, 2013 at 12:34 pm

It's me again, guys! :D I just published another piece, Death's Cold Grip. If you guys would check it out, I'll be sure to rate/comment any two of your pieces! (Just let me know which you want me to read in your comment below.) Have a great day!

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WrenArrington replied...
Jun. 8, 2013 at 9:05 pm

I rated/commented on Death's Cold Grip already; if you could check out any two of my poems, that'd be great. I have a fairly lengthy one called Angels' Cliff--if you choose that one, you don't have to do a second one. Whatever you wanna do is fine with me. Thanks in advance :)

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KrasotaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 9, 2013 at 6:24 pm

No problem! :D Will do.

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WrenArrington replied...
Jun. 10, 2013 at 1:23 am

So it's past midnight, I'm bored, and I need something to do. If I rate/comment on a few more of your poems, will you do the same for me? I'll tackle yours right now :P

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WrenArrington replied...
Jun. 10, 2013 at 1:42 am

I did The Hero and the Python, The Innocent Heart, and Two Sides of Violence, and I loved all three of them :)

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KrasotaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 10, 2013 at 2:06 pm

Thank you so much! I'll be sure to stalk some of your work :D

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ZeroDarkFlirty replied...
Jun. 11, 2013 at 6:15 pm

As a new member of this site, I only have one work uploaded (Ships in the Night) but I would be more than happy to review your poem for you, and I would greatly appreciate the same in return. Thanks in advance!

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 11, 2013 at 7:38 pm

Hey there again! Could you take a look at my two new pieces "Virtual Friend" and "I write for.." They are both short and yes I will definitly read your new piece. Thanks!

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ZeroDarkFlirty replied...
Jun. 11, 2013 at 8:09 pm

Hi, Laugh-it-Out. I'm new to the site and I am looking for some reviews on my work, Ships in the Night. If I give you some feedback on the pieces you mentioned, do you think you can return the favor? It's only one work, and the theme seems similar to your "Virtual Friend" piece (which I rated five stars). I'd appreciate any response you can give me, yet I also understand if you do not have time to review my poem. Thanks in advance!

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Jun. 11, 2013 at 8:45 pm

Hello! The only piece I have on this site is called Crayola Colors, and it's a bit long so I'm fine that it's the only thing to review :) I am getting to Death's Cold Grip and all I ask is that you comment honestly!

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Jun. 12, 2013 at 12:16 am

Ok, for some reason my username for the above post didn't show. Sorry about that! My username is crayola_green and I rated several of your pieces, commenting on Death's Cold Grip and Not a Peep of Protest. Just in case, my poem is here: TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/477753/Crayola-Colors/
Again, I'm really sorry!

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KrasotaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 13, 2013 at 4:04 pm

Sure thing! Sorry, I haven't been on teenink in a while because I was frankly considering deleting my account, but I will go ahead and see to all of your poems shortly!

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BlackbeltJamesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 15, 2013 at 1:49 pm

Hey, I commented and rated your work, nice interpretation of death.

I would appreciate it if you rated and commented on "I'm halfway out, the choice is yours" and "she ain't no pussy cat".

Thanks :)

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mrsmusicforlifeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 24, 2013 at 11:20 am

I read Death's Cold Grip. If you would check out my newest song, "Thinking Of You" that would be great. Thanks in advance !!! x

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 24, 2013 at 1:13 pm

I rated/commented! Would you mind reading my new poem 'Celestial Space'? Thanks:)

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KrasotaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 28, 2013 at 10:16 pm

All righty I'll get to your stuff after I finish sleeping :D Camp was taxing on my brain. @mrsmusicforlife @LexusMarie

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