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Read my new poem and I'll read 2-3 of yours:)

LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
May 26, 2013 at 7:32 pm

Hey there! I have a new poem up called 'The Dance of the Souls'. If you could read/comment on it I'd really appreciate it and I will leave you some feedback on at least two of your poems/stories. Thank you.

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dragonsandthree replied...
May 26, 2013 at 8:55 pm

Hey, Lexus! Can you just check out something of mine that you have not read? Thanks!

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 26, 2013 at 9:59 pm

Yes sir! 

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dragonsandthree replied...
May 26, 2013 at 10:06 pm

Please don't call me sir! It makes my skin crawl. I'm only 15.

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 26, 2013 at 10:34 pm

You have read all of mine, so I will do this without payment ;) can't wait to read your greatest collection Lexus oh and got the IPhone soooo great!!!! Keep rockin

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 26, 2013 at 10:39 pm

Lololol! That made me laugh so hard, Andy! I do that to all of my friends on purpose to make them angry and omg I did that without even thinking. I'm sorry, sir. Haha, just kidding. But, seriously, I am sorry.
 
Thank you Liv! OH! That just reminded me to write you a lullaby.. I will get right on that.

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dragonsandthree replied...
May 26, 2013 at 10:41 pm

It's fine.

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 26, 2013 at 10:42 pm

Thanks Lexus your lullaby is coming along great :)

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 26, 2013 at 11:19 pm

So, are you posting it on your profile or are you just going to put in on a comment?

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RozaAlexanderThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 27, 2013 at 12:35 am

yeah, and if it isn't to much trouble maybe you could comment and ask other people to read them to

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 27, 2013 at 10:43 am

Lexus, was that last comment for me? Well if so, I think that u will ask you your opinion, and if you like it I will submit it :) if not well that's okay too:) have a nice day Lexus :))))

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 27, 2013 at 10:59 am

Hey, Roza, I rated/commented on 'Too Young'.
 
Alright, Liv!

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 27, 2013 at 4:42 pm

How's my lullaby coming along??????

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 27, 2013 at 5:09 pm

Great! I think it's done.. how's mine?

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 27, 2013 at 6:47 pm

Ummm coming along well. To be honest, his lullaby stuff is hard! Are you going to post it on forums or submit it?

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 27, 2013 at 7:28 pm

When I wrote lullabies for the novel I made the lines very short and I kept it under 12 lines. I will probably submit mine. How about you?

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Akanekusa replied...
May 28, 2013 at 11:27 am

I'll read it-it sounds very beautiful just by the title :D

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 28, 2013 at 12:48 pm

Hey there, thanks a lot. I rated/commented on 'Blamed-Triplet'.

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RoyalCorona replied...
May 28, 2013 at 1:45 pm

Hey LexusMarie and everyone else on this thread, I just uploaded my story The Kid, it is now on Teenink and it would mean a lot if you guys could check it out. I know it's not a poem but if you don't mind, could you please check it out? Thanks!

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 28, 2013 at 3:39 pm

I rated/commented.
 

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