Hey there! I have a new poem up called 'The Dance of the Souls'. If you could read/comment on it I'd really appreciate it and I will leave you some feedback on at least two of your poems/stories. Thank you.
Hey, Lexus! Can you just check out something of mine that you have not read? Thanks!
Please don't call me sir! It makes my skin crawl. I'm only 15.
You have read all of mine, so I will do this without payment ;) can't wait to read your greatest collection Lexus oh and got the IPhone soooo great!!!! Keep rockin
Lololol! That made me laugh so hard, Andy! I do that to all of my friends on purpose to make them angry and omg I did that without even thinking. I'm sorry, sir. Haha, just kidding. But, seriously, I am sorry.
Thank you Liv! OH! That just reminded me to write you a lullaby.. I will get right on that.
Thanks Lexus your lullaby is coming along great :)
So, are you posting it on your profile or are you just going to put in on a comment?
yeah, and if it isn't to much trouble maybe you could comment and ask other people to read them to
Lexus, was that last comment for me? Well if so, I think that u will ask you your opinion, and if you like it I will submit it :) if not well that's okay too:) have a nice day Lexus :))))
Hey, Roza, I rated/commented on 'Too Young'.
How's my lullaby coming along??????
Great! I think it's done.. how's mine?
Ummm coming along well. To be honest, his lullaby stuff is hard! Are you going to post it on forums or submit it?
When I wrote lullabies for the novel I made the lines very short and I kept it under 12 lines. I will probably submit mine. How about you?
I'll read it-it sounds very beautiful just by the title :D
Hey there, thanks a lot. I rated/commented on 'Blamed-Triplet'.
Hey LexusMarie and everyone else on this thread, I just uploaded my story The Kid, it is now on Teenink and it would mean a lot if you guys could check it out. I know it's not a poem but if you don't mind, could you please check it out? Thanks!