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Poem: No matter; I'll wait for you....

PandaBearLouise15 posted this thread...
May 24, 2013 at 7:54 am

No Matter how long I have to wait,


    I'll wait for you,


No matter who you love or don't love,


    I'll wait for you,


No matter if I mean something to you,


    I'll wait for you, and find out what you really want from me........


    Or don't want from me......


No matter how this all ends, just know this.....


    I'll always love you and love you and I always will........


 


            Always and Forever, Your baby girl.......who loves you.....So much........


 


 


            Poem Made up By Me to you.........


             I love you Frank Latin......


   Even though the feelings may not be mutual
 

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SunballSunnyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 24, 2013 at 8:09 am

this is really good ..............it shows ur feelings an emotions all together....

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PandaBearLouise15 replied...
May 26, 2013 at 10:34 am

Well, it came truely from my heart............and i love him very much so, and we're in a situation thats a mess to get out of............ So i emailed that to him and he loved it, but we're still ina perdicament........

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TheEpic95 replied...
May 26, 2013 at 11:10 pm

I think the line "I'll always love you and I always will" was awkward. Perhaps there is another way to repeat the phrase without it sounding redundant? Even saying it the same way twice, i think, fit better.But overall, this is just glorious! It had shuch an emotional amd heartfelt air, I hope the boy who this is for, Frank, appreciates the skill and effort and feeling so obviously put into this.

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PandaBearLouise15 replied...
May 27, 2013 at 9:40 am

me too....... :"( i love him dearly

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TheEpic95 replied...
May 27, 2013 at 10:12 am

Cheer up! You'll find the right guy. Perhaps that guy is your Frank, perhaps not. Are you Christian? Google "St Anthony, Be Satisfied With Me". It is an amazing poem, and amazing comfort.

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PandaBearLouise15 replied...
May 28, 2013 at 7:53 am

Im....actually not religious so..........

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TheEpic95 replied...
May 28, 2013 at 10:28 am

Was just a suggestion, and a good poem. Good luck!

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PandaBearLouise15 replied...
Jun. 7, 2013 at 5:48 pm

Thanks anyways....for the suggestion... and thanks......for the good luck....

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DarkAngels replied...
Jun. 14, 2013 at 3:40 pm

That was an amazing poem.I know what your going through its hard trying to figure out wether he loves you or not.Then when you see that hes going out with someone your heart achs but you put on a smile and be happy for him because hes happy,but on the inside your hurting.You want to be the only one he looks at and the only one he holds.im in love with someone too but if he loves me back is still a mystery...im too shy to admit it. I hope you get him

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PandaBearLouise15 replied...
Jun. 14, 2013 at 5:35 pm

I hope so too...... I love love LOVE him! And he just seems to go along with what his mother says, "Its the right thing to do, is marry her" He has a right to make his OWN decision(s)...... not listen to mommy his whole d@mn life......

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PandaBearLouise15 replied...
Jun. 14, 2013 at 5:41 pm

Yeah......im sorry for you....and i hope REALLY hope he comes to me....i love love LOVE him! and i want him sooo bad, and he listens to his mom and she said its the right thing for him to marry this girl that he got pregnant.....and i told him it should be his choice, not hers.......but oh no....he wants her to control him his whole life....apperently......... :"(

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PandaBearLouise15 replied...
Jun. 14, 2013 at 5:47 pm

I hope i get him back....i love him....... way too much...more than he even thinks i do........ I'd literally do ANYTHING and EVERYTHING for him........ i love him that much...... i need him back.....

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