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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Apr. 29, 2013 at 6:22 pm

Hey, guys~ Are there any good critquers (ik i spelled tht wrong lol) out there who are looking for their own feedback? Well, it happens to be that i really need feedback (hence this message) and id be happy to return the favor! Pick either fiction or poetry on my profile when u click my name... whatever ud prefer. I really appreciate it! (and remember... I WILL return the favor! :D) THANKS SOOO MUCH!

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dragonsandthree replied...
Apr. 29, 2013 at 7:12 pm

Can you read either A Dark Night or Willow Shade? The former is fiction and the latter is poetry.

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NewYorkLove replied...
Apr. 29, 2013 at 7:30 pm

I'd love to help!! Could you critique this back? Thanks! TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/544338/Player/

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swat17 replied...
Apr. 30, 2013 at 8:33 pm

Can you read and comment on my piece titled "Stacy Hallmark, English, Louisa County High School"? I'll critique your work too. Thanks!

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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 1, 2013 at 4:39 pm

read and commented, ur very talented! :)

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crayola_green replied...
May 2, 2013 at 4:52 pm

Hello! Would you please be able to leave a comment on my poem Crayola Colors? It's my only piece of work on this site. Be warned, it's a bit long for a free verse poem :) Thanks!

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 2, 2013 at 5:08 pm

Please read Good Morning and Lavender. I'll go read two of your works right now. 

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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 2, 2013 at 9:08 pm

Sure! Going to right now :)

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Chichot123 replied...
May 4, 2013 at 4:55 am

Heyyy :) I would really apprieciate it if you could read ans rate my poem 'Before the Important Game'.  I did the same thing for some of your stuff, your are a very talented writer!

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Alex_Writer replied...
May 4, 2013 at 9:20 pm

Could Hannah Child please comment on Chills, Witch Trials, OR Torn.  Thank you!  I'll read comment on yours right now!

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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 10, 2013 at 9:34 pm

No problem Alex child LOL

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KrasotaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 11, 2013 at 12:06 pm

Could you please read The Glass' Bottom? I think I've already commented on "Inferno." Thank you and have an awesome day! :D

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Chichot123 replied...
May 12, 2013 at 1:52 pm

Heyy, could you read, rate and comment on my haikus "Photograph" and "The Nearing Summer". I will do the same thing for some of your stuff. :) 

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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 12, 2013 at 3:53 pm

No problem, iAmanda, done and done :)

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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 12, 2013 at 4:03 pm

Yep, finished :) @Krasota and Chichot123

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jmitchbbThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 12, 2013 at 5:47 pm

I just commented on Pieces and I would love if you would comment on any of mine...Thanks!

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 12, 2013 at 8:30 pm

Hi! Could you check out some of my work, I have one new peice p called The Beauty Bus. Would love if you could take a look! I will check out some of your work as well. Thanks! :)

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laurengerhard replied...
May 12, 2013 at 8:52 pm

I did Dream State, Pieces, Heads or Tails, and Ticking Time. Would you mind doing some of mine? Thank you!

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TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 13, 2013 at 11:19 am

I read and rated "Heads or Tails?" Id be glad if you could do the same for one of mine, but right now I just wanna know who the speaker was in that poem.....!!!!!

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Soccer23 replied...
May 13, 2013 at 4:57 pm

will you read and comment on some of my work please and thank you!

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