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beccalynn1663 replied...
Apr. 26, 2013 at 4:07 pm

please read some of my poems thanks!

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 27, 2013 at 12:29 pm

Hey there, could you read my new poem 'Porcelain Friend'? Thanks.

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Apr. 27, 2013 at 3:16 pm

I'd be glad if you critique some of my poetry and why would I not want to read yours..I mean not because I want to return the favour no, nothing of the sort... ...just because you wrote this post in the exact way that you did makes me wonder what a person you must be and what poetry you write....So I'll definitely read it...Well I'm serious about all of my poems duh! But here are some I like " A Poetess, I?" .... "Do We Ever listen to our own advice".... "The Little Things That Matter"... "What She's worth"......You didn't say how many you'd read I hope this isn't too much... Feel free to read whatever you like.. I like people snooping around my stuff :P

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wordnerd54 replied...
Apr. 29, 2013 at 4:54 pm

If you could read any of my work, it'd be greatly appreciated! (Just whichever one or ones you'd like.) Thanks so much!!

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dragonsandthree replied...
Apr. 29, 2013 at 7:19 pm

Can you read Willow Shade for me?

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NewYorkLove replied...
Apr. 29, 2013 at 7:25 pm

that would be amazing!! thanks so much X.
Here's the link: TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/544338/Player/

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Chichot123 replied...
May 16, 2013 at 3:37 pm

Hey :D could you please look at my haikus "The Nearing Summer" and "The Night Sky". I will do the same thing for your work. 

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beelzebubblez88 replied...
May 16, 2013 at 9:23 pm

if you could give feedback on TeenInk.com/forums?act=post&topic_id=16&thread_id=75066 i will GLADLY return the favor thank you

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Edison99This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 17, 2013 at 12:49 am

Hi, i would love it if you could critique this poem.
TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/532644/Conformity/

i will definitely return the favor thank you

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MyApocalypticThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 17, 2013 at 11:59 am

Just so everyone knows, I'm still getting to some of your poems. Very busy with the end of school and whatnot. Have patience, I'll get to your work soon :))

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AnathemaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 23, 2013 at 1:11 am

If you could read either of my poems that would be lovely. Family Forgiveness is the better of the two, though. 

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candlelightwriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 23, 2013 at 11:43 am

So I really respect you as a poet, and I would really love it if you could check out my poems "Playing in the Rain" and "To Hear You Laugh" because I'm considering submitting both of these poems to contests. Thanks so much.
TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/531810/Playing-in-the-Rain/
TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/540734/To-Hear-you-Laugh/

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candlelightwriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 23, 2013 at 5:50 pm

Sorry if this is a repost, but I fear my other comment didn't show up. Anywho....
I would really appreciate it if you could check out my poems "To Hear You Laugh" and "Playing in the Rain" because I am considering submitting both to contests. I really respect you as a poet and I would really value any feedback. Thank you so much for doing this.

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