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MyApocalypticThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 3:51 pm

I'll read your poetry and try to give you some constructive feedback. You can return the favour or not, either way is fine with me. May not get around to it for a little bit, but you have my word I will when I can. I'm pretty honest and good at this sort of thing, so if you're looking for feedback that's actually going to help you, I'm here.
Uhh, there was something else, too...
Yeah. Please only post links to poems you're serious about and would genuinely like me to read/critique. If you just want someone to tell you you're great, there are other "fb for fb" feeds.
Tallyho :)
 

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swat17 replied...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 4:45 pm

Hey, I'd love for you to read any of my work, thanks!

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mrsmusicforlifeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 5:27 pm

If you would read some of my work that would be great(: Read any song of mine you'd like, I don't care which. Thanks in advance :D

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jmitchbbThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 6:39 pm

I'd love for you to read my work, and please be critical! Thanks!

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clarity_77 replied...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 7:00 pm

If you could read any of the things I have posted and give some constructive feedback, it would be greatly appreciated. Thank you so much for taking the time to help others become better writers :)

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AugustSummerFlingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 16, 2013 at 7:53 am

I have read your editor's choice poems :) they're we're cool :) please critique TeenInk.com/poetry/haiku/article/538431/Fairy-Tale-of-Murder/ this is my favorite piece :) but please be honest n critique :) And this one too :) TeenInk.com/poetry/haiku/article/540369/Broken-Promise/ Thanks a bunch :)

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jonpettigrew replied...
Apr. 16, 2013 at 2:27 pm

I would appreciate feedback!

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laurengerhard replied...
Apr. 17, 2013 at 5:03 pm

my sister was a princess who could never remember her crown and cinderella's first-aid kit, please!

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 4:13 pm

I don't care what you wanna read from my pieces as long as you're reading them is fine by me. And, duh, I'll totally return the favor. The pleasure might turn out to be more mine than it might be yours. lol 

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 7:23 pm

I would really like it if you read my peice As the world goes on, and my peice Girl on Fire. Will be sure to check out some of your work. Thanks!

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AugustSummerFlingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 10:21 am

TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/542497/The-Vending-Machine/ Ill return the favor :)

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MyApocalypticThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 22, 2013 at 3:01 pm

Haha, what?
 

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 22, 2013 at 6:39 pm

Could you take a look at my peice Victim of a Gun please?! Thanks!

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 22, 2013 at 9:42 pm

sorry to ask again, but could you also read my new peice A Tragc Story?? i understand if you dont have time. btws your stuff is great, i checked out a bunch of your work thanks

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lily_singsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 24, 2013 at 9:34 am

Please read my poem Light in the Dark of the Night! I'll read some of yours :)

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Apr. 24, 2013 at 1:47 pm

Hi it would be great if you could read some of my work. Thank you.

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swat17 replied...
Apr. 24, 2013 at 4:24 pm

This isn't poetry but can you please rate and comment? Thank you! TeenInk.com/nonfiction/educator_of_the_year/article/541810/Stacy-Hallmark-English-Louisa-County-High-School/

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jess14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 24, 2013 at 7:12 pm

hey my name is jess and i would REALLY appreciate it if u read and critqued some of my work. i thnk its awesome that ur actually giving people advice and i would love to get some on my work. THANKS!

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swat17 replied...
Apr. 25, 2013 at 7:31 am

Hey myapocolyptic, thanks for being such a great critic! Would you mind rating and commenting on my educator of the year piece titled "Stacy Hallmark, English, Louisa County High School"? I'd really appreciate it. Thank you!

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