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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 10:53 pm

You can tell me a specific thing to read or I can just go to your page and read it! Even if you give me something specific I will more than likely read more.. and along with the comment I leave you I will rate your writing. Thanks in advance! You can just read anyone of mine.. doesn't matter. Xx!

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TheEpic95 replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 1:13 am

I did "Good Luck" and "Quick Song". Do you think you could do "Imperial Dust" and "Just an Ordinary Doomsday" for me? Thanks!

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Emma T. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 3:45 pm

I will read your poem

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Emma T. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 3:46 pm

can you guys read my poem please??? i really want cunstrctive critism
 

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 6:39 pm

I don't see a poem on your page, Emma!

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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 6:58 pm

If you have time, can you read "Ripple Affect" and any other poem? I'll make sure to read two of yours :)

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 7:21 pm

I read Ripple Affect and Atlantis and commented on both! (: Thanks a ton!

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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 7:31 pm

Your welcome! Can't remember which ones of yours I commented on, but I did!! :)

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 7:33 pm

I got them.. thank you so much!
Love your avatar by the way.. she's perfect. c:

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StarlitSunriseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 7:35 pm

I have just commented on three of yours. :) If you don't mind checking out a few of mine, I would greatly appreciate it. ^.^ Thanks in advance!

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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 7:36 pm

^ hey StarlitSunrise! Have you submitted anything new? I forgot how much I love your poetry :)

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StarlitSunriseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 7:38 pm

Hey Jaded! I actually added a bunch more just a few days ago. :) What about you? It'd be great to read more from you. ^.^

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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 7:41 pm

I'll check out your stuff ^-^ ... actually, I uploaded a bunch of pictures, and maybe a couple more poems. Don't remember how many...maybe two or three. I'm always writing new stuff. 
 
What's the name of your new ones? :)

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 7:43 pm

I commented on Declaration of a Dreamer and For my Brother! c:

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StarlitSunriseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 7:46 pm

Haha I'm the same way. But please do not feel like you need to read mine; there are quite a few and I really wouldn't want to waste your time. 
 
I'll go look for your new ones though. :) I'd love to read them, and I'll take a look at a few of your photos as well.

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StarlitSunriseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 7:46 pm

Thank you Lexus!! :)

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laurengerhard replied...
Apr. 2, 2013 at 3:55 pm

I commented on "Spineless Worm" and "Finding The Key" for you, would you mind commenting on "Cinderella's first-aid kit" and "my sister was a princess who could never remember her crown" for me?

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7_Ambitions replied...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 11:01 am

I Read Finding The Key and Left A Comment,  Can You Please Read My Poem Stupid Navie Love

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 7:00 pm

I did! c: And thanks so much!

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jess14 replied...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 12:02 pm

hey can u read my poem good enough ill check out ur work! my freind Laugh-it-out sent me said ur stuff was good

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