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so much more(feedback please)

TyJefferson posted this thread...
Mar. 30, 2013 at 11:14 pm

we been friends for far to long 
every moment that we had is a lie
you say you dont want to throw it away
but you see it when you look into my eyes
everything we could have and more
so why do you keep shutting the door
your walking farther from where you want
with every lie you tell makes it harder 
for me to pull you back to reality 
when you close your eyes what do you see
are you right here with me 
or are you still hiding behind your lies
i know you can see were meant to be
so let go and leave all the worries

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