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a sad story with a happy ending

writerauterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Mar. 28, 2013 at 11:33 pm

i watched you stand in front of the mirror just wishing
i heard you cry behind your closed doors just braking
i wanted so bad to just let you know i was there for you
i was too young, and you were too broken to be fixed
the words you needed to hear, couldnt come from me
they could only come from him.
 
even when the wind blew strong
and knocked you down again
i could count on you...
even when the glass shattered
and cut his fist again
i could hug you...
you were always strong
but he finally knocked you down.
 
i watched him hurt us again his strong fist shaking
i heard him yell in your face, mean things, always taking
you wanted so bad to let me know you were there for me
you were too weak, i was too far away to see the ending
the strength you needed to live, couldnt come from me
but didnt come from him.
 
even when the wind blew strong
and knocked you down again
i could count on you...
even when the glass shattered
and cut his fist again
i could hug you...
you were always strong
but he went and finally won.
 
you took your chance, had to get out, and drove away
went down to the place by the highschool, your ending
took the pills all at once, felt them slowly numb the pain
as you drifted off to sleep, i sat there at home worrying
the wind blew far too strong...
knocked you down for good
you closed your eyes and opened them
blinking, you stared at the gates of heaven.
 
 

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nikki1This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 12:07 pm

WOW!!!!!!!!!!THAT IS AMAZING. GREAT WORK. DEEP AND RAW.

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writerauterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 6:52 pm

thankyou very much. :)

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