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Anyone want some feedback?

DimitryBinsfeld replied...
May 30, 2013 at 10:58 am

that is a really cool poem

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bree_bree replied...
May 30, 2013 at 12:47 pm

do you mean my poem? sorry just a little confused XD

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SincerelyManonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 30, 2013 at 6:58 pm

id love for you to read any of my work! Any at all! maybe a comment too? Thanx:)

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LexusMarie replied...
May 30, 2013 at 7:41 pm

Mckay, miss popular over here. Everyone wants your feedback. (; It was nice to sort of talk to you on chat, haha! When you get the chance can you look at my new poem, 'The Dance of the Souls'? Just whenever you want to.

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 31, 2013 at 1:04 pm

Thanks so much, Liv. And don't worry about it. It happens to me too. The comment thing that is. I awww, please son't hate me. You're talented yourself. 

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 11, 2013 at 4:19 pm

Bree_bree, I read you work. And I appreciate the feedback for i don't believe in counting stars.

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 11, 2013 at 4:20 pm

SincerelyManon, I read and commented on your work. 

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 11, 2013 at 7:33 pm

Hey! Could you please take a look at my new haiku "I Write For..." Thanks! I also just checked out like three of your pieces that I hadn't read so expect some wonderful comments ;) haha have a wonderful summer Mckay, keep rockin

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ZeroDarkFlirty replied...
Jun. 11, 2013 at 8:15 pm

TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/559331/Ships-in-the-Night/ PS: I'm new to the site, and from what I hear, you're a very popular member here. If it's not too much to ask for, would you mind giving me some advice on how to get my works noticed? Thanks in advance for any help you can provide, and I will be sure to hold up my end of the deal and give you some feedback on your works.

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Jazmyne805 replied...
Jun. 12, 2013 at 10:33 am

Here are my recently submitted poems: TeenInk.com/poetry/all/article/559516/Two-heartbeats/
TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/559513/Ode-to-Mother/
Feedback and constructive crticism are very much appreciated! :) Thank you so much for viewing them! :)

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 12, 2013 at 3:52 pm

Hey, Liv. I will check it out ASAP. And have a nice summer as well. And thanks for reading my work. ^u^

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 12, 2013 at 3:55 pm

Hey, Lexus. It was great chatting with you. Anytime. I'll read you poem right now. Sorry, I've taken forever. I get side-tracked so easily. 

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PhoenixCrossing replied...
Jun. 12, 2013 at 11:34 pm

I'd love to check out your work! Can you please read and critique my poem Rest Softly on Angel Wings? Thanks!

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uhmjanis replied...
Jun. 13, 2013 at 2:57 pm

can you check out some of my work and let me know what you think? thanks so much :) 

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 19, 2013 at 9:09 pm

Oh my god! Mckay, Lorca is amazing!! I have only read two pieces by him but they are both exceptional. I read: Arbolé, Arbolé and The City Never Sleeps. If you haven't read the city never sleeps, you have to it is amazing!! Also, can i post my spanish poem in progress here? I would love some feedback. Buenas noches mckay

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IAmWhoIWantToBe replied...
Jun. 21, 2013 at 3:29 am

Hey, could you check out some of my poems? I don't mind which one of them. I'll try checking out your work, too if I got the time. Thanks...

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Niquel replied...
Jun. 24, 2013 at 2:44 pm

I am already a fan of you. So far, you are my favorite poet on TeenInk. Probably one of my favorite poets, period. I was reading one of yours the other day and I swear I felt a pang of envy it was so amazing. I will continue to work through your hundreds of posts in my spare time. Well, if you could, in your free time, read this one? TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/561112/A-Broken-Home/ I wrote it about ra.pe, if the question arises. I won a contest at school with it, but I still tweak on it to this day. Any comment you give, whether it's nice or harsh, would be much appreciated. Thank you so much. Oh! And I know you are going to make it as a writer. Hands down. No questions asked.

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Niquel replied...
Jun. 24, 2013 at 2:45 pm

Ugh...did my comment not post...?

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Niquel replied...
Jun. 24, 2013 at 2:47 pm

Ugh! I don't think it did. I told you you were my favorite poet on the site. And wrote out this whole message on how awesome your work is and how I am going to continue reading it in my spare time etc. didn't even post. Will you read this? TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/561112/A-Broken-Home/

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 24, 2013 at 4:03 pm

Hey Mckay, sorry to ask you yet again for your amazing feedback but i have a couple of new poems that are not that long. Mind taking a look at them? Thanks! I commented on Poem for the World which was spectacular. :) ok that's all (you know what's next) keep rockin

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