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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 2, 2013 at 9:49 pm

Thanks!!! Aything new??

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 2, 2013 at 10:28 pm

Oh, Mckay, if you write it I can guarantee that I will like it. I have grown more fond of haikus. I read Liv's and I was like hmm, haikus are growing fonder to Lexus. Oh and just so you know, I will not deny I love boy bands, I LOVE BACKSTREET BOYS BECAUSE THEY ARE MY FIRE AND MY ONE DESIRE. YOU BETTER BELIEVE ME WHEN I SAY THAT.. MCKAY!

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 2, 2013 at 10:33 pm

Lexus, your crazy!

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 6, 2013 at 2:52 pm

Lexus I read you work. You're fabulous as always. Keep doin you thang! And I too love the Backstreet Boys. or at least I did once. Nsync to me ruled the house. Just sayin ^u^.

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kikixkupkake replied...
May 6, 2013 at 9:29 pm

can you give me feedback on some of my work? Ill read yours

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Someone2know replied...
May 9, 2013 at 12:38 pm

Please read and comment..?? TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/544264/I-am/

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 9, 2013 at 2:18 pm

Liv, I read your pieces. Sorry it took so long. But I couldn't find Hungry Eyes. You're always rocking. 

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 9, 2013 at 3:06 pm

I read your poems, kikixkupkake. You can read whichever poems you'd like. I'd appreciate it if you read Good Morning with whichever else you want to read. Anytime you have more new work, lemme know. I enjoy reading your poetry. So creative and original.

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 12, 2013 at 9:16 pm

Hey Mckay! Ok, sorry to bother you, but if you still want to read Hungry Eyes, heres the link:
TeenInk.com/nonfiction/all/article/528923/Hungry-Eyes/
okay, thats all. Keep rockin as always. Oh, and anything new????

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 12, 2013 at 9:22 pm

Mckay! I have a new poem up called 'Wolves Among Sheep'! Long time no talk..

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iDani-iBeauty replied...
May 12, 2013 at 10:43 pm

- If You Can Read/ Comment On My Poem 'Honor The Past and Prepare For The Future' , That Would Be Very Appreciated ! 
I'll Return The Favor, I Promise . :)

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 15, 2013 at 6:37 pm

I will certainly read your work right now. iDani-iBeauty.

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 15, 2013 at 6:38 pm

Done, Jeeves. And DON'T YOU EVER QUIT WRITING!! EvER!! ^u^

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 17, 2013 at 2:20 pm

Apologies for not commenting sooner, everyone. Had a busy week. But I have commented on all your requests. 

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 24, 2013 at 6:35 pm

Dani, can you comment on Good Morning. I'd appreciate it. 

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 29, 2013 at 6:40 pm

Hey Mckay! Ummm I am here to let you know that I commented on Wisteria but for some reason it isn't showing up so I just wanted to tell you that it was awesome (as usual) and That I LOVED YOUR WORD CHOICE like "mauve-hued" and "a nebula of" genius really. Love your work soooooo much. Also saw wisteria for the first time on Monday. It was so pretty cuz the people had put it up on an entrance way and it hung down like tiny chandeliers so yeah. Awesome job. Oh and the last line was PERFECT! I really hate your talent some times ;) anyway. Yeah keep rockin: forever and always

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bree_breeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 30, 2013 at 10:38 am

i would really apreciate any feedback on any of my wrighting. my newest one is a thread here called something wicked this way comes tell me what you think. i will definatly return the favor :)

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