Laugh-it-Out, of course I'll see this new work of yours. And Congrats! on receiving you first—first, was it?—Editors' Choice! XD I'm so happy for you. It's so great when someone whose work I admire is praised and awarded the way it should be. And thank you for admiring my work as well. Keep rockin and writing as always!
Cutey-Beauty, of course, I will check out your work. And you keep rocking and writing as well. :)
Hey Mckay! I just got a new peice up, it's called living a safe life. As for A Tragic Story, I am thinking of making it into a novel.....thanks to you ;) anyway thanks. Oh, and some advice. Do you think these are good names? Brittany Lancaster( the princess) and Rebeca (bex) Jayne? Thanks and you know. Always love your stuff and feedback keep rockin
please read and give me feedback rate and commentTeenInk.com/poetry/all/article/543516/I-Remember-Baghdad/
flickers once, a blackened flame
cuts the light in devil’s name
ink that splashed upon the wall
heralded by lone nights call
he sputters with the candle flare
and jumps with every gust of air
he comforts the man with cradled gin
a comrade in likeness, partner in sin
And as the man gets up to go
the darker man becomes the foe
he follows him, a silent tail
a watcher clothed in jet-black mail
but man of ebon senses dawn
sees the patrons get up and yawn
he knows his death is near at hand
he has not long in mortal land
and as the sun crawls slowly near
demon of jet retre
Laugh-it-Out, AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Seriously, you're taking my advice?! That's awesome. That made my day. Of course, they're great names. Lancaster reminds me of Hazel Grace from The Fault in Our Stars—sidenote, did you know I wrote a haiku to Hazel? Cheesy, I know; but I love the novel. Yes, the names are perfect. Keep at it. I want to read this someday as a novel. Maybe, it'll even become a movie—which I don't doubt. (Hey, I'm kinda thinking of doing some directing myself. Maybe we could team up. Like Tate Taylor did with his freind Kathryn Stockett with her novel The Help. Dunno. Would be cool.) But I support you with this story/novel and anything you do.I'm all ares to any of your future ideas with this. Just lemme know. Ok? It means a lot that you would consider my advice. I support you all the way. ^u^ Keep rocking and writing.
Pensword, wow, what a poem! Everything is perfect. Except in 4th stanza. Did you mean ebony rather than "ebon"? I not sure so I wanna ask you just to be certain. This had rhyme and rhythm that added a smooth flow. It is chilling as well. What's the title? Please lemme know. And if you haven't posted it on the site. Please DO. It's a very interesting poem. Interesting and intriguin in a very good way.
Oh, by the way, the last word had me a little confused. Sorry. Can you explain it. Anytime, I read something I wanna make sure I understand it clearly.
Can you please look at my poem "What If..." I'm about to go read some of your stuff :)
Sure will, Maypay.
TeenInk.com/poetry/all/article/544252/Hold-On/ please read and rate also please feel free to commment! thank you so much!
HEY MCKAY!!! can you take a look at my new peice Unhinged? thank you and keep rockin ;)
Yes, I will. Right now! I'm on it. Keep rockin'!
Of course. I love the title already!
Hi Mckay!!! Could you take a look at my poems How the World Began and I'll Show You the Way. Also, if you have time, could you look at my poem HUngry Eyes, its on anon so you might have to search for it. Thanks! Keep rockin <3
Mckay.. hey! Omg. That rhymes. I never realized that. I am going to greet you like that EVERYTIME now. Hahaha. Anyways, I have some new stuff up if you wanna have a look? (: And when are you going to post some new stuff, missy?
Liv, I'll do my best, cuz you know I will. It's Mckay 100% promise and guarantee.
Lexuz, no questions asked. Of course. I will. And I'll come up with a creative way to greet you. might take me a while. And to answer your second question: SOON! I've submitted like 10 things. Plenty of haikus. Even though i remeber you saying you're not a fan of them that much. Oh well. I'll have plenty of new stuff. Hope you like it.