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Anyone want some feedback?

ElsaMae replied...
Mar. 28, 2013 at 12:11 am

Would you look at my poems "No." and "SunShift"? Thanks so much!

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 28, 2013 at 2:21 pm

You got it.

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Rolledthestone replied...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 1:07 pm

It's really nice that you're up to doing this. I mean, whenever I say feedback for feedback I do (eventually) follow through but I know some ppl don't. Could you check out my poems 905-WORLD and Global Strike Against the Restriction of Soles?

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 4:17 pm

i sure will.

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TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 30, 2013 at 12:36 am

Hmm.. that was a fun mission! But hey, would you comment on my poem "Imperial Dust"? Tnx

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 1:45 pm

Sure will. 

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laurengerhard replied...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 3:54 pm

Would you mind looking through my work and giving feeback? I'll go look at some of yours right now. :)

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 2:29 pm

I certainly will. It would be my pleasure. And nice to meet you. 

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 8:19 pm

Could u look at my 2 new poetries As the world goes on, and The torrents of a life forever wet. I will look at more of ur stuf f also since ur an awesome writer. Thanks

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 5, 2013 at 12:30 pm

Yes, I will. And you're also swesome-er.

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TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 5, 2013 at 10:51 pm

I just read Dionysus Serves Me Cup To Drink. Beautiful, even if it did (horror of horrors!) Make me think. ;) Would you mind checking out Hidden Colors? Thanks!

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 8, 2013 at 1:52 pm

Great works Epic95. But did you delete Hidden Colors?

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Jessie M. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 8, 2013 at 7:05 pm

Could you please read my two poems? Thanks....

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 9, 2013 at 1:31 pm

You got it, Jessie M.

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OldYoungOne replied...
Apr. 9, 2013 at 2:43 pm

I would appreciate it if you read my poems and told me what you thought of them you can read the non fiction pieces if you chose to. Thank You.

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 10, 2013 at 1:51 pm

I sure will.

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 11, 2013 at 4:19 pm

I read your work OldYoundOne. I gotta say I'm a fan of your poetry and all you submit.

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KrianThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 11, 2013 at 11:39 pm

Could you please read some of my work? I've got 8 articles, you can choose. Thanks. 

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 12, 2013 at 1:46 pm

Of course I will. You can also choose to read whichever piece I wrote. 

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 12, 2013 at 3:11 pm

Hey! Can you please read '$50 Cologne'? Thank you! I'll comment on your stuff! c: I love too, anyways.

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