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Warlock posted this thread...
Mar. 3, 2013 at 2:02 pm

There she standing alone

with a broken life….

Guys go by only to lie…. to her.

Every night she cries into her pillow

Wishing she could go back.

Now she has to live a life

She never wanted to.





If only she knew she was more

That her life isn’t just it

If only…she could see



she still could change it all

that someone out there will love her

despite her flaws and

pass mistakes



Every day she's looking

every day she hoping

Evey day she wishing

That life would just take

a new turn





If only she knew she was more

That her life isn’t just it





If only…she could see

she still could change it all

that someone out there will love her

despite her flaws and pass mistakes



If only

she new

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Warlock replied...
Mar. 3, 2013 at 2:05 pm

I wrote this beacuse one of the my friends is messing up her life and it breaking my heart. I talked to her and she just said "I just stop caring." I wrote this for her.....

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GLoveGG replied...
Mar. 4, 2013 at 3:09 pm

You must be a really good friend if you were able to see into this.. I'm hoping she realizes she's worth something.. because everyone gets a chance. You did a great job with this.

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SuNshiNe007 replied...
Mar. 5, 2013 at 3:01 pm

Warlock this is beautiful. And I can totally relate to this being Im a girl. I used to be this girl. You are very thoughtful and kind. But at the end where you say "she new" take no offense but its suppost to be "she knew". But otherwise everything else is great. ;) have a great day!

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Warlock replied...
Mar. 5, 2013 at 3:43 pm

Thanks...i'st cool...i knew i would miss something.

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