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ChristineElizabeth posted this thread...
Feb. 28, 2013 at 6:14 pm

Silence speaks the loudest, 
Silence was the only thing that was heard
Not one sound was made, not even the chirp of a  bird
As I sat all alone, tears streaming down my face.
Am I still beautiful? Even when I cry?
I've been feeling so out of place.
Don't have the energy anymore to try.
My apoliges sir,
Let me put on my smile fake
Just like you will at my wake...
You'll all pretend to care
When not one person was ever there.
Silence speaks the loudest
Louder than any word that might've been said.
Louder than any action you should have taken.
Too bad to spoke to late...
Decided you would care
And change what I hear
To love. 

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ChristineElizabeth replied...
Feb. 28, 2013 at 6:21 pm

Ok, so I'm new to this site, and I'm sure I didn't post this thread right. Sorry!!! Anyway, if anyone could read this and tell me what they think, I would really appreciate it!

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ILuvBritishBoys replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 9:33 am

I dont see anything wrong with thread :) and by the way this is a great piece. I love how you tell so much in this poem to where it gives me an exact image! I think the first two lines are the strongest in this, and they are also my favorite. :) Keep up the awesome writing :) Check out some of mine sometime?

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zombieslayer22 replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 4:08 pm

hi im dani and i love your poem its really good

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Askean replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 7:22 pm

my,my,such an amazing poem I just read i hope my is half good. i'm still new to this, exposing my work to others.

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