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kristinarose posted this thread...
Feb. 28, 2013 at 5:31 pm

 
The demons inside, they cry.
Clawing beneath my skin, the monsters.. They pry.
Out to get me, they’re after my mind.
Running, keep running.
Heart in my hands, leaving it all behind.
Don’t stop running.
The demons inside, they cry.
The monsters inside, they pry.
But they won’t get me this time.

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Alex_Writer replied...
Mar. 7, 2013 at 1:58 pm

Wow! This is really good, I felt the emotion when reading it.  I would reccomend to put "they cry", "they pry", "leaving it all behind", "they're after my mind" as new lines, seperate from the ones they are on now.  It was very interesting all together :)

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