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SteelersJdog posted this thread...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 9:26 pm

So, I just want a comment or a rate on one of my poems (they're not too long or anything), and then I will return the favor by commenting and rating not just one, but 4-5 of your poems.
 
Yes, it's absurd, but if you want some quality feedback on a lot of your poems, this is the right place. Honestly, even if you don't review one of my poems, I will review yours as in-depth as I can and I will attempt to do 4-5 of your poems. Just post in this thread, and if you have the time, review mine as well please. Thanks!

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MegaSockThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 10:49 pm

I read your Enterprise of Love and Longings of the Depressed. Those were AMAZING poems :D I commented and rated on both. I haven't submitted any poems yet, but I'd very much appreciate it if you glanced at my story "A Stranger in the Road." Again, great poems!

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SteelersJdog replied...
Feb. 26, 2013 at 9:48 am

Sure, I'll get to it after school today if you don't mind :)

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Apollo77 replied...
Feb. 26, 2013 at 9:28 pm

great, I commented on two of yours, could you comment on a few f mine, thanks!

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SteelersJdog replied...
Feb. 27, 2013 at 11:01 am

Alright, I got to yours Apollo. Mega, I'll try to get to yours tomorrow, it takes me a bit longer to digest a piece of prose writing, but I should have it done tomorrow.

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mrsmusicforlifeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 27, 2013 at 4:27 pm

Done(: You can read some of my songs. (I have a story and some free verse poems, but they aren't very good lol). If you'd like to only do 2 or 3, that's okay. But yeahh. lol. Thanks in advance!(:

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SteelersJdog replied...
Feb. 28, 2013 at 11:23 pm

Alright, I gotcha guys ;). Mrsmusicforlife, I'm not really  skilled at critiquing songs, but I checked them out and they were really good. I just didn't comment on them because I wouldn't have been able to give you any substantial feedback. I hope that you don't mind that I only reviewed 2 of your poems. I couldn't find any others on your profile, but if you have 2 or 3 more that you want reviewed , just tell me. Thanks guys, keep em' coming! :)

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ILuvBritishBoysThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 9:48 am

I read your poem The Folly of Youth, it was really good by the way:) Check some of mine out sometime? I dont care which ones. :)

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ILuvBritishBoysThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 9:49 am

* The Folly of a Youth * ^

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SteelersJdog replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 11:23 pm

Sure, I should be able to review both of yours tomorrow most likely.

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Lil_Miss_Turtle replied...
Mar. 3, 2013 at 2:30 am

I only have one poem up right now because I just joined but will you check it out? I'll read yours right now. (:

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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 5, 2013 at 10:29 am

Hi j-dog :). Finally, someone who debates AND writes.
Check out something of mine, I'm looking at yours in a minute! :P

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SteelersJdog replied...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 10:30 am

Hey guys, thanks for the replies! I should be responding to all of yours soon! I have had to prepare for a missions trip that I am going on, so I'm sorry if I haven't reviewed your stuff yet! You guys should be good by the end of the week though! 

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FemmeGeek replied...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 9:26 pm

Could you check out my poem? Thanks!

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