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chrissychris2270117 posted this thread...
Feb. 16, 2013 at 5:02 pm

Your voice is like tears in my eyes,
Your lips are as glorious as the moonlight,
When I hear your words in your writing,
I crumble to tears,
As a blade stings my heart,
And cuts it in half,
I try not to cry, I try not to tear,
But my blood is leaking out of my soul,
Into my vessels,
Untill you himatize me under your mind,
I will be in pain.

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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 11:58 pm

This is good, your imagery is amazing... But what does it mean?? :)

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