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My Valentine's Day Poem

Brokenness_is_Beautiful posted this thread...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 2:45 pm

 
Butterflies dancing in my stomach
Sending the little fluttering
Rhythm straight to my heart
 
Fly me back to childhood innocence
Where sunshine is God's love beaming down
And rain drops are angels tears.
 
I want you to be my wings
Take my hand and soar with me
Take me to the end of eternity and back.
 
Be my guide and my shield,
My present and my future,
My valentine, now and forever. 

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BriannaR replied...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 4:37 pm

This is so tranquil I love this , never stop writing :) .

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Poetic_Person replied...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 8:50 pm

It's perfect! I love it

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mrsmusicforlifeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 15, 2013 at 5:38 pm

Love it! Well done!

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Feb. 18, 2013 at 10:55 am

Thank you so much...I was so nervous giving it  to him. It was my first time writing a poem for him. 

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