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thatunknownthingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Feb. 7 at 7:21 am

hey all
I'm offering to comment on your poetry pieces, if you want criticism. I'd be frank, with opinions that may not necessarily please you.
If you want your piece reviewed, put down the link as a comment or paste your poem below.
Also, your views on my pieces are welcome.
Thanks.

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Lawless-FlameRoseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 7 at 10:47 am

id like some vcomment on any poem u want

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PaigeStreetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 7 at 5:23 pm

Please help yourself to anything you find on mine. I'll return the favor if I can. 

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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 7 at 10:48 pm

Can you check out one of my poems? I will comment on some of yours:)

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thatunknownthingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 9 at 6:53 am

done, for all three of you. :)

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Feb. 10 at 12:03 pm

Some advice please? Not that many pieces but maybe you should see'em... :D

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HeatherSembThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 10 at 1:16 pm

It'd be cool if you could check out some of my poems(: Thanks

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SteelersJdogThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 12 at 5:03 pm

http://www.teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/525827/Broken-Glass/
http://www.teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/525831/Longings-of-the-Depressed/
If you could review either one of these poems, I would appreciate it! I will also review yours.

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theloverofbooksThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 12 at 7:10 pm

I would really appreciate some feedback and criticism on my poetry, especially my newest poem, "Hail." I'll be sure to check out some of your work!

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ILuvBritishBoysThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 13 at 9:48 am

Would looking at the some of mine, I dont care which ones, I would really like some feedback. Thanks:)

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thatunknownthingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 17 at 3:49 am

Done, again, for all of you. I hope you could make sense out of what i suggested! :)
 

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Maggie99This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 17 at 7:32 am

My three poems were just approved. I would really appreciate you rating/commenting. Thank you!

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mrsmusicforlifeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 17 at 9:49 am

I was wondering if you would look at my song, "I Don't Need Your Love Anymore"
Thanks in advance!

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Maggie99This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 17 at 11:20 am

I rated and commented.

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ScoleciteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 17 at 3:38 pm

Count me in, please.

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nmk1128This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 17 at 4:44 pm

Please and thank you (: http://www.teenink.com/poetry/sonnet/article/527373/Love-of-Youth/

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nmk1128This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 17 at 4:45 pm

check out my "Love of Youth" poem please and thank you

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laurengerhardThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 3 at 7:49 pm

I'd appreciate if you would check out some of my pieces. I'll take a look at yours, as well. :)

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LiraDaerisThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 4 at 12:25 am

http://www.teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/538552/When-Everything-is-Due-Tomorrow/ Could you take a look at this one for me? Thanks a lot :)

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 4 at 12:48 am

Please look at my poem I’m Conscience-Stricken! Thanks so much!

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