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thatunknownthing posted this thread...
Feb. 7, 2013 at 7:21 am

hey all
I'm offering to comment on your poetry pieces, if you want criticism. I'd be frank, with opinions that may not necessarily please you.
If you want your piece reviewed, put down the link as a comment or paste your poem below.
Also, your views on my pieces are welcome.
Thanks.

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Lawless-FlameRose replied...
Feb. 7, 2013 at 10:47 am

id like some vcomment on any poem u want

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PaigeStreet replied...
Feb. 7, 2013 at 5:23 pm

Please help yourself to anything you find on mine. I'll return the favor if I can. 

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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 7, 2013 at 10:48 pm

Can you check out one of my poems? I will comment on some of yours:)

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thatunknownthing replied...
Feb. 9, 2013 at 6:53 am

done, for all three of you. :)

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Feb. 10, 2013 at 12:03 pm

Some advice please? Not that many pieces but maybe you should see'em... :D

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HeatherSemb replied...
Feb. 10, 2013 at 1:16 pm

It'd be cool if you could check out some of my poems(: Thanks

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SteelersJdog replied...
Feb. 12, 2013 at 5:03 pm

TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/525827/Broken-Glass/
TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/525831/Longings-of-the-Depressed/
If you could review either one of these poems, I would appreciate it! I will also review yours.

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theloverofbooks replied...
Feb. 12, 2013 at 7:10 pm

I would really appreciate some feedback and criticism on my poetry, especially my newest poem, "Hail." I'll be sure to check out some of your work!

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ILuvBritishBoysThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 13, 2013 at 9:48 am

Would looking at the some of mine, I dont care which ones, I would really like some feedback. Thanks:)

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thatunknownthing replied...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 3:49 am

Done, again, for all of you. I hope you could make sense out of what i suggested! :)
 

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Maggie99 replied...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 7:32 am

My three poems were just approved. I would really appreciate you rating/commenting. Thank you!

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mrsmusicforlifeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 9:49 am

I was wondering if you would look at my song, "I Don't Need Your Love Anymore"
Thanks in advance!

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Maggie99 replied...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 11:20 am

I rated and commented.

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Scolecite replied...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 3:38 pm

Count me in, please.

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nmk1128 replied...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 4:44 pm

Please and thank you (: TeenInk.com/poetry/sonnet/article/527373/Love-of-Youth/

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nmk1128 replied...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 4:45 pm

check out my "Love of Youth" poem please and thank you

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laurengerhard replied...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 7:49 pm

I'd appreciate if you would check out some of my pieces. I'll take a look at yours, as well. :)

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LiraDaeris replied...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 12:25 am

TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/538552/When-Everything-is-Due-Tomorrow/ Could you take a look at this one for me? Thanks a lot :)

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 12:48 am

Please look at my poem I’m Conscience-Stricken! Thanks so much!

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