I have written a poem on my mind. I think it requires some polishing. I reqquest you to please read my poem on my account and give your valuable response, in return i will also give my sincere feedback to your creations.
What is it called?
I gave the title" My Mind". But I think you can suggest me a better title. it's the only poem you'll find on my account.
Its good and i will not change a thing
I will love to join
My Mind does this help
thnx. u very much zaynie !! u're really good!
I really liked the way you expressed both the freedom and constriction of thought! It was really interesting! Keep writing (:
thanx. tom I would .