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I'm a beginner, pls help me out.

Nicksamson posted this thread...
Jan. 28, 2013 at 5:25 am

I have written a poem on my mind. I think it requires some polishing. I reqquest you to please read my poem on my account and give your valuable response, in return i will also give my sincere feedback to your creations.

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PandaBearLouise15 replied...
Jan. 29, 2013 at 4:21 pm

What is it called?

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Nicksamson replied...
Jan. 30, 2013 at 9:10 am

I gave the title" My Mind". But I think you can suggest me a better title. it's the only poem you'll find on my account.

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Zaynie replied...
Jan. 31, 2013 at 1:33 pm

Its good and i will not change a thing

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Zaynie replied...
Jan. 31, 2013 at 1:34 pm

I will love to join 

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Zaynie replied...
Jan. 31, 2013 at 1:35 pm

My Mind does this help

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Nicksamson replied...
Feb. 2, 2013 at 5:34 am

thnx. u very much zaynie !! u're really good!

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TomDuff replied...
Feb. 4, 2013 at 4:56 am

I really liked the way you expressed both the freedom and constriction of thought! It was really interesting! Keep writing (:

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Nicksamson replied...
Feb. 4, 2013 at 5:21 am

thanx. tom I would .

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