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AmyLeighThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Jan. 26, 2013 at 2:52 pm

I'm fairly new to this website so I don't have much work up yet, but I'll be adding more soon. I would LOVE to give feedback to any poems/song lyrics anyone has, and would really appreciate any comments on the poems I've already uploaded!

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BeckSunflower replied...
Jan. 26, 2013 at 11:00 pm

I would love to help you out with that. But before i do, i am a very honest person. I would never tell you anythng sucked because no poem does as long as you put you essence into into it but the constructive criticism might be more than you bargained for. But if that is alright with you, I'd be happy to.

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RolledthestoneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 27, 2013 at 10:49 am

Tis always my pleasure.

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AmyLeighThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 27, 2013 at 11:09 am

i welcome constructive criticism!!! i haven't been writing poetry for very long and i'll take any advice that will help me improve :) thank you so much

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Soccer23 replied...
Jan. 27, 2013 at 9:15 pm

I gave you some feedback! I like your work do you mind giving me some feedback in my work ? Please and thank you!

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Nicksamson replied...
Jan. 28, 2013 at 1:06 pm

I like your poems and gave you some feedback which I felt was necessary. Would you mind giving me some feedback on my poem? It's the only poem i have written till now and a little suggestion might help me create better poems in future.
 

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AmyLeighThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 28, 2013 at 7:17 pm

of course!!! thank you so much :)

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twitte14 replied...
Jan. 29, 2013 at 5:21 pm

I commented on your most recent poem! I would love some feedback from you as well.

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AmyLeighThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 29, 2013 at 7:30 pm

thank you very much! i just left some feedback on yours :)

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Lawless-FlameRoseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 30, 2013 at 9:15 am

ill give u feedback for feedback on my poem lost in the moment

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AmyLeighThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 30, 2013 at 7:38 pm

but of course! and thank you very much.

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TheCapturedBatThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 30, 2013 at 7:44 pm

Your poem "Unraveled" is amazing! It is among my favorite poems that I have read on Teen Ink. I would love it if you would read some of my poems and tell me what you think. You are extremely talented!

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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 2, 2013 at 12:19 am

I commented on your poem "unraveled" ... Very swell btw. Anyway, if you wanna will you check out my poem, "Daniel"? I can't tell what's wrong with it, but I want to improve my writing! :)

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