I'm fairly new to this website so I don't have much work up yet, but I'll be adding more soon. I would LOVE to give feedback to any poems/song lyrics anyone has, and would really appreciate any comments on the poems I've already uploaded!
I would love to help you out with that. But before i do, i am a very honest person. I would never tell you anythng sucked because no poem does as long as you put you essence into into it but the constructive criticism might be more than you bargained for. But if that is alright with you, I'd be happy to.
Tis always my pleasure.
i welcome constructive criticism!!! i haven't been writing poetry for very long and i'll take any advice that will help me improve :) thank you so much
I gave you some feedback! I like your work do you mind giving me some feedback in my work ? Please and thank you!
I like your poems and gave you some feedback which I felt was necessary. Would you mind giving me some feedback on my poem? It's the only poem i have written till now and a little suggestion might help me create better poems in future.
of course!!! thank you so much :)
I commented on your most recent poem! I would love some feedback from you as well.
thank you very much! i just left some feedback on yours :)
ill give u feedback for feedback on my poem lost in the moment
but of course! and thank you very much.
Your poem "Unraveled" is amazing! It is among my favorite poems that I have read on Teen Ink. I would love it if you would read some of my poems and tell me what you think. You are extremely talented!
I commented on your poem "unraveled" ... Very swell btw. Anyway, if you wanna will you check out my poem, "Daniel"? I can't tell what's wrong with it, but I want to improve my writing! :)