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This emptieness in me

CowgirlBri posted this thread...
Jan. 25, 2013 at 10:03 pm

This emptieness in me, it's thriving, it's deep, it's always a hungerin' for more, it can't be satified, it's an adic on my pain, I do belive. It's undescribale, it's like a black whole, no a bottomless pit, it seeks something, I've tried love, friends, family, reading, and writing.... ...but This emptieness in me grows. It's quite overwehlming, fustrating and irratating, It's mistrous, It wants, possibly needs....something? Does it want my soul? Does it want suffering? Does it want joy? Oh what does this hateful awaking want?

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Jan. 30, 2013 at 12:02 pm

what is "adic"? and whole should be hole. but it's good. very...ominous and dark.

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CowgirlBri replied...
Feb. 1, 2013 at 12:52 pm

Oops suppose to be addict, and thank you.

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Feb. 1, 2013 at 1:48 pm

it is really good me and my brother likes it

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