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Jan. 25, 2013 at 2:50 pm

Smash the cold clocks

Trash the dials of light

Douse the Sun

Shroud the Moon in its own darkness

Have all measurements of time destroyed



Never to be recreated

Have space stop in mid-step

Let me remain in his arms 

Kept in this lucid dream

Forever suspended in this sweet fantasy

Keep me away from the end 

The sorrowful regrets

The imprint of his lips covered in my hidden by my lonely tears




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jetta.ck replied...
Jan. 31, 2013 at 6:46 pm

Interesting! I really had to contemplate this one to figure out what it meant to me.
You've got a really nice writing style, especially at the beginning. Your metaphors at the beginning are just impeccable. Great job.

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