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Hold me soildger (might change to hero)

CowgirlBri posted this thread...
Jan. 25, 2013 at 1:15 pm

This was something that suddenly crossed my mind and sprang from my heart and I felt like I should write it. Please help me improve it.

A little girl, about four or five, laid in this arms,
he was a brave man,
his heart feirce,
he was a American soildger(might change to firefighter...plz help me decide),
the little girl sang to him, "Please hold me soildger, don't let me fall. I'm not ready to go. Tell my family, I love them. When I go tell them I'm in a better place, but for now soildger please hold me. Oh for now please hold me soildger, don't let me fall, I'm not ready to go yet, but when the sun is at it's highest I will fade into dust. Oh but for now, soildger, please hold me"
A little girl, about four or five, laid in this arms.

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