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Soccer23 posted this thread...
Jan. 24, 2013 at 4:58 pm

Teeth white as snow,
Lips red as blood 
dark hazel eyes bearing down on my rosy cheeks 
making me wish I was his 
I try not to look
but it's hard not to stare 
knowing he is always there
I wish to take his hand and intertwine them with my own
just thinking of this makes me shake down to my bones
so i quickly look down 
he places his hand 
on my warm forhead 
making me quiver 
he quickly retracts 
and I can't help but laugh
a crocked grin paints his face 
leaving his everlasting mark 
on my heart 

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purplehani replied...
Jan. 24, 2013 at 6:02 pm

this poem is excellent. It reached out and grabbed my heaart.

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Soccer23 replied...
Jan. 27, 2013 at 7:23 pm

Thank you!

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