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mommy13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Jan. 21, 2013 at 6:42 pm

invisible girl
that's me
no one can see me
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
no one can hear me
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
the ghost of darkness
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
proud of it
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
imbrasing it
invisible
is me

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Anna141This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 24, 2013 at 1:10 pm

I like this poem. I like how the is me's, and the that's me's are almost nagging the reader, like the invisible girl is trying to be heard, dispite the fact that she's also proud she is invisible. Very well done, keep writing!

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purplehani replied...
Jan. 24, 2013 at 6:05 pm

i feel like you repeat "me" too much

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mommy13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 29, 2013 at 3:52 pm

thanks for being honest

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mommy13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 29, 2013 at 4:10 pm

this is the best poem every i am a big fan luv diz poem <3 . <3

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PandaBearLouise15 replied...
Jan. 29, 2013 at 7:39 pm

I LOVE IT
 

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mommy13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 31, 2013 at 3:48 pm

thanks for your comments

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Hourglass replied...
Feb. 1, 2013 at 2:15 pm

 Wonderful poem 

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moe-moe14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 4, 2013 at 3:53 pm

thank you all

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