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Jan. 18, 2013 at 11:07 pm

I never thought I'd be in second place
In the few contests that were important
His Heart
 
But I guess I was always second
Never First
 
I see you never got over her
And you used me to try to get rid of the pain
Well It didn't work very well
 
His Smile said he like me
So did his words
But his eyes said otherwise
Because when ever she was in the room
He'd only look at her
 
It hurt me in the inside
So I decided to tell him the truth
I couldn't do this anymore
I told him I can't be with you if you like her
 
I told him I can't be second
I told him go
Go and win her heart
 
He looked at me and said I'm sorry
Then left
 
I let a few silent tears roll down my face
It just sinked in that he never really like me
 
I vowed
That some day
I'd find some one who is going to let me be first never sceond place in their heart

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TheSkyOwesMeRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 19, 2013 at 12:45 pm

Great job! I especially loved the statement in your conclusion. I would appreciate it if you could look at some of my work too :)

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