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Chains that Bind Me

Aqua. posted this thread...
Jan. 18, 2013 at 2:47 pm

I am told to be proper
I am told to be poised
I am told to not speak unless spoken to
I am told to always obey
I am told I have to be perfect
But when I look at myself
I don't see myself
I see a doll
A doll
with many other replicas
The exact same as me
I look in the mirror I see a refection that isn't me
I want to be beautiful but not starve
I want to go run in the garden but its not graceful
Nor poised
I want to talk even if I'm not spoken to
I want to do what I feel is right not to be told what is right
I want to fall in love not be forced to wed
I want to have a genuin smile
But I want to be free of these chains first
The chains of High standards
The chains of a fake smile

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praise_pray_write replied...
Jan. 18, 2013 at 6:36 pm

Love the concept, just a few spelling and grammar mistakes you might want to fix up. This is great though! :)

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