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RandomPoetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Jan. 17, 2013 at 10:05 am

I happen to be a VIP and i would love to give advice and read your work :) And i have 11 articles so if you like to read poems  you can read some of mine and tell me what you think if you don't  thats ok :) 

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TheSkyOwesMeRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 19, 2013 at 12:06 am

I'd appreciate it if you'd look at some of my work! :)

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KailaMarie replied...
Jan. 19, 2013 at 3:50 pm

I'd love if you could give me some advice on mine!! (: 

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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 19, 2013 at 5:18 pm

Here is the start to one of my songs: 
 
Chorus: And I love you every minute every hour. I even think about you in the shower. No matter what I do my mind is ruled thoughts of you. So baby this song is my love letter. Cause when I look at you my heart starts to flutter

When I look at you my spine sends out a quick shudder.



1st verse:

I see you standing over there on the street corner smiling like you do.

You caught my eye and I won’t lie you never let it go.

I must admit when I got bit by the love bug

I think it saved my life.

And I love you every minute every hour. I even think about you in the shower. No matter what I do my mind is ruled thoughts of  you. So baby this song is my love letter. Cause when I look at you my heart starts to flutter

When I look at you my spine sends out a quick shudder.

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RandomPoetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 19, 2013 at 7:12 pm

I like it :) When i read it i think of how i am. And how i do the same thing. I can't wait till you finish it so i can read the rest.

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RandomPoetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 19, 2013 at 7:13 pm

Totally i will :) Thank you for looking at mine

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nmk1128 replied...
Jan. 20, 2013 at 12:18 pm

I'd enjoy some feedback (:

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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 2, 2013 at 12:39 am

Yeppers, if AND ONLY IF you comment on mine. Just kidding!!! I will totally and happily comment, rate, and love your work.

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