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flanny posted this thread...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 9:23 pm

I will give feedback to those who wish, if you give me feedback for my pieces.
Thanks!:)

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guardianofthestars replied...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 9:31 pm

I'll read some of yours if you read some of mine. I only have once poetry peice on my page, but if you'd rather read some of my other stories that is fine too.

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RandomPoet replied...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 9:34 pm

I happen to have 11 articles posted on teenink. And i was wondering if i can get some feedback and advice on them . And be harsh if you like ill take to make me a better writer. And i will love to read some of your work. I enjoy being inspired and reading somthing new!

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nmk1128 replied...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 10:19 pm

I'd quite enjoy some feedback (: 

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Rolledthestone replied...
Jan. 17, 2013 at 11:19 am

Who doesn't love feedback (it's like writer currency ;-)

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KailaMarie replied...
Jan. 19, 2013 at 3:53 pm

I only have one poem up so far, since I'm new, but I'd love if you read it!!!(:

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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 19, 2013 at 5:17 pm

Here is the start to one of my songs: 
Chorus: And I love you every minute every hour. I even think about you in the shower. No matter what I do my mind is ruled thoughts of you. So baby this song is my love letter. Cause when I look at you my heart starts to flutter

When I look at you my spine sends out a quick shudder.



1st verse:

I see you standing over there on the street corner smiling like you do.

You caught my eye and I won’t lie you never let it go.

I must admit when I got bit by the love bug

I think it saved my life.

And I love you every minute every hour. I even think about you in the shower. No matter what I do my mind is ruled thoughts of  you. So baby this song is my love letter. Cause when I look at you my heart starts to flutter

When I look at you my spine sends out a quick shudder.

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flanny replied...
Jan. 20, 2013 at 2:28 pm

I loved it! It was very entertaining and catchy

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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 2, 2013 at 12:34 am

Will definitely read your stuff. And I you feel like it, can you read some of mine? :) some of it is better than others, though....

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flanny replied...
Feb. 2, 2013 at 12:36 pm

I couldn't find your poem game point, but I commented on some others.

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jetta.ckThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 2, 2013 at 4:32 pm

I'd appreciate some feedback on my newer pieces! ( Thanks so much for doings this - I'll definitely take a look at your work, in addition.

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OldYoungOne replied...
Feb. 3, 2013 at 10:36 pm

i have some bew pieces since the last time you chaecked me out so I urge to look at mt stuff thanks

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Lawless-FlameRose replied...
Feb. 5, 2013 at 2:06 pm

Id like some feedback on some of mines then id be happy to give u some feedback

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