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I will give feedback to those who wish, if you give me feedback for my pieces.
Thanks!:)
I'll read some of yours if you read some of mine. I only have once poetry peice on my page, but if you'd rather read some of my other stories that is fine too.
I happen to have 11 articles posted on teenink. And i was wondering if i can get some feedback and advice on them . And be harsh if you like ill take to make me a better writer. And i will love to read some of your work. I enjoy being inspired and reading somthing new!
Who doesn't love feedback (it's like writer currency ;-)
I only have one poem up so far, since I'm new, but I'd love if you read it!!!(:
Here is the start to one of my songs:
Chorus: And I love you every minute every hour. I even think about you in the shower. No matter what I do my mind is ruled thoughts of you. So baby this song is my love letter. Cause when I look at you my heart starts to flutter
When I look at you my spine sends out a quick shudder.
1st verse:
I see you standing over there on the street corner smiling like you do.
You caught my eye and I won’t lie you never let it go.
I must admit when I got bit by the love bug
I think it saved my life.
And I love you every minute every hour. I even think about you in the shower. No matter what I do my mind is ruled thoughts of you. So baby this song is my love letter. Cause when I look at you my heart starts to flutter
When I look at you my spine sends out a quick shudder.
Will definitely read your stuff. And I you feel like it, can you read some of mine? :) some of it is better than others, though....
I couldn't find your poem game point, but I commented on some others.
I'd appreciate some feedback on my newer pieces! ( Thanks so much for doings this - I'll definitely take a look at your work, in addition.
i have some bew pieces since the last time you chaecked me out so I urge to look at mt stuff thanks
Id like some feedback on some of mines then id be happy to give u some feedback