I need your opinion everybody and anybody! what do you think if this idea for a short story title?
"Investigation to find the criminal & the crime?"
Honestly, no. Sorry, it might help if we knew the story though.
i think its too long sorry
I posted this same post in the fiction& Short story place too, and If you go there and read the comment, you can see what other ppl think too, and like i said in the other place was, I'll just post what I have up, with the title, and just see what everybody thinks of it...... How does that sound???
Thats to long. How about these "The committer of the crime" or "The investigation" or "Searching for the criminal" or "The crime commited". Hope one of these will work.
Finding the Crime?
"Crimminal or crime"?
I think you need to play around with your word choice and the mood. Is there a deeper meaning than the investigation itself? It would be easier to critique if I knew the story, but one thing's for sure: it's too long.
Thanks to u all! You have been a big help, but i have an idea, I am going to write alot of cases, of different stories, but The one i asked all of you, I have theee perfect name for it, I have this title, for my first case.... "Investigation: Finding a red stain: Case #1"
Like i said, there will be other cases going to be written, just a matter of time.
If you wanted to you could name them after the five most famous questions. Who, what, when, where, and why?Like the first one could be Who: A Detectives Story.
How about "Finding the criminal and discovering a crime?" Or the other thing you could do is "Wanted: Criminal and Crime" IDK, just suggestions
Thanks, again, but I have already stuck with the title I created, but with help with sone else who was on another post I put up........
" Investigation:Finding a red stain: Case #1"