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KeishaLouise15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Dec. 28, 2012 at 3:13 pm

I need your opinion everybody and anybody! what do you think if this idea for a short story title?

 
"Investigation to find the criminal & the crime?"

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Confuzzled5This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 28, 2012 at 8:01 pm

Honestly, no. Sorry, it might help if we knew the story though.

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Angelic_Kitten_Guenyth replied...
Dec. 28, 2012 at 11:02 pm

i think its too long sorry

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PandaBearLouise15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 11:27 am

I posted this same post in the fiction& Short story place too, and If you go there and read the comment, you can see what other ppl think too, and like i said in the other place was, I'll just post what I have up, with the title, and just see what everybody thinks of it...... How does that sound???

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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 3:05 pm

Thats to long. How about these "The committer of the crime" or "The investigation" or "Searching for the criminal" or "The crime commited". Hope one of these will work. 

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LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 8:12 pm

Finding the Crime?

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EPluribusUnumThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 1 at 6:12 pm

"Crimminal or crime"?

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AmayaEcho replied...
Jan. 1 at 6:38 pm

I think you need to play around with your word choice and the mood.  Is there a deeper meaning than the investigation itself?  It would be easier to critique if I knew the story, but one thing's for sure: it's too long.

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PandaBearLouise15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 6 at 6:47 pm

Thanks to u all! You have been a big help, but i have an idea, I am going to write alot of cases, of different stories, but The one i asked all of you, I have theee perfect name for it, I have this title, for my first case.... "Investigation: Finding a red stain: Case #1"
Like i said, there will be other cases going to be written, just a matter of time.

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IsabelJamesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 6 at 11:08 pm

If you wanted to you could name them after the five most famous questions. Who, what, when, where, and why?Like the first one could be Who: A Detectives Story.

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nightrunner23This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 7 at 9:55 am

How about "Finding the criminal and discovering a crime?"  Or the other thing you could do is "Wanted: Criminal and Crime"  IDK, just suggestions

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PandaBearLouise15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 7 at 7:18 pm

Thanks, again, but I have already stuck with the title I created, but with help with sone else who was on another post I put up........
I havethis
" Investigation:Finding a red stain: Case #1"

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