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kdaws15 posted this thread...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 1:50 am

I know why the time goes by

Every second, every minute, every hour

I know why the time goes by

Memories reestablished every tick, every tock

Feelings embroidered into every dash

I know why the time goes by

Emotions awakened each centimeter

There is no reliving the past

The hopes of tomorrow keep me going

I know why the time goes by.

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kirstiecookie replied...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 11:38 am

I think you should try to make it longer or add more lines to show what you're trying to say

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KnitsandPurls replied...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 12:57 pm

This is a very good poem, I read and commented on it where it was posted.
:)

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