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Dec. 8, 2012 at 1:50 am
I know why the time goes by
Every second, every minute, every hour
I know why the time goes by
Memories reestablished every tick, every tock
Feelings embroidered into every dash
I know why the time goes by
Emotions awakened each centimeter
There is no reliving the past
The hopes of tomorrow keep me going
I know why the time goes by.
Dec. 8, 2012 at 11:38 am
I think you should try to make it longer or add more lines to show what you're trying to say
Dec. 8, 2012 at 12:57 pm
This is a very good poem, I read and commented on it where it was posted.
:)
