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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 11:23 pm

Christian has many excellent character traits. Some of which being patience and passion. At certain points in the book Christian displays patience, and it helps him through his struggles. At other time he displays passion, and that also helps him. These impact Christians journey, because if he did not have passion he would not feel so strongly about persisting and getting to the Celestial city,but if he lacked patience he would have gotten into trouble because he could not wait for his trials to pass through. He might have given up on his journey. Just like Christian I portray both of these traits, but I tend to display passion more than patience. In the book Christian actually meets two children named Passion and Patience they are a vision from the interpreter. Christian learns that the patient man will receive all that is in store for him while the passionate man squanders all his joy and riches in the present. This will impact my life goal because if I want to achieve this goal I need to be patient enough to wait for my gosl to develop over time; however, I need to be passionate enough to actually grasp it. I do not like to sit around and wait for things to happen, I like to make them happen. I need both patience and passion in order to sustain myself while I try to fulfill my goal because if I want to become an artist I will need passion to help fill me with ideas, and patience for when something does not turn out right.I know that God will help me fill myself with both of these character attributes.

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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 11:24 pm

Sorry that was my English homewrok lol my poetry is posted below

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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 11:25 pm

 
Hiding is my identity
the shadows are my friends
quiet is my haunting spirit.
My soul was scorched by the fire
that still burns in my mind.
I have been pushed away from love and
hidden behind lies.  




Nightfall is when I can hide
yet by day in bitterness I reside.
My heart is like a wilting flower
it dies one petal at a time.
Some prayers will never be answered
and some dreams are eternally deferred.


                      Be not this terrible curse for I never need





feel the pain because no matter the happenstance
or the cruelty, hiding will forever be my identity.
 

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