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Through the Clearing- Do you like it?

kdaws15 posted this thread...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 5:23 pm

Splash! As children cannonball into it
Moving the buoyant birds of position
Causing camouflage frogs to ribbet
And forcing the fruit trees to fruition.

Willows sway in their wisdom
Dropping seeds of life to their bright future
The breeze is the known source of the kingdom
Breathing life and cause to spread its fervor

Blooming petals do embroider the coast
So that the frothy water soon colors
And the gill-ed creatures are hap at most
Darting and dashing like all the others

Born and grown to absorb such great wonders
Splashing and thriving into and under.

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kirstiecookie replied...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 2:55 pm

I like the imagery! What is the theme of this though?

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taylorbugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 7:09 pm

@Kirstie: It says the theme of it in her description of this poem. (:

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