I have suffered foolish burden
And hear sweetly foul threats
I pray now;
No more amazement-
Comfort as fresh as nature be my magic apple
Rest as sweet as life take me
Peace bring me joy
Yet I sense the sound of a man besting sleepy shackles
Swim, bark, hail five fingers kissed by my lips
A man asleep on his own island ushers me
Hush now, and heigh my hearts:
It is time to descend
I like this poem. I think it's interesting that you used one stanza instead of multiple stanzas. Check out my poetry if you can thanksss.
Its good , i like it.
This is good! Can you read my poem "Inside the Body" Please?
I like this, but it sounded a bit choppy if you know what I mean. Try adding some more words to better explain your ideas.