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Overtly dramatic piece?

IfLifeGivesYouLemons posted this thread...
Nov. 22, 2012 at 12:41 am

Hey, I just wrote a new poem. And, well, I think I may have gotten a tad bit carried away. It's basically about all my frustrations and hatred when it comes to love and relationships. I'm only 14 so I suppose theoretically I shouldn't be using the word love at all. So...is it overly dramatic? I do want to keep it realistic, i suppose. i don't want it to turn into something...bad.



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Please, let me know.

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jetta.ckThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 28, 2013 at 6:03 pm

I'll be glad to comment. (:

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