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hipstirsss replied...
Dec. 30, 2012 at 11:06 pm

If you dont mind, could you read my Are You Ready? poem and give me feedback....??

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Hamzawaseem replied...
Dec. 31, 2012 at 2:46 am

TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/515925/High-Aim/
Plz comment and rate and check out my other works

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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 1, 2013 at 3:50 pm

Could you check out this poem before I submit it? 
 
I meet new people every time I open a book cover.

I tear through the pages of their lives

Anxiously uncovering their darkest secrets.

I discover their sorrows and joys.

I empathise with the struggles they overcome.

I become friends with the black ink dancing on the parchment.

I never wish to bid farewell to my new found companions,

but I always reach the lone page that has been waiting to steal

my written family away from me.

Yet to wipe away all the sorrow I must only open another book cover.

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AmayaEcho replied...
Jan. 1, 2013 at 6:47 pm

Could you please read and comment on my articles My Imagination and/or The Author?  Thank you!

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jetta.bliss.pulseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 3, 2013 at 9:02 pm

@Sparkle: Your song lyrics, "Leave and leave my heart behind" are phenomenal! I love how poetic and smooth the lines are written, and I can seriously hear this song broadcasting on the radio. Great job. Add some more metaphors if you're craving a little more zing. (:

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bright_eyes replied...
Jan. 4, 2013 at 12:02 am

Hi! Looks like you have a lot of requests, but if you get an opportunity would you mind checking out one of my poems? They're all super short, if that helps :P
Thanks!

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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 2, 2013 at 1:06 am

Well of course I would love you to read my stuff!! But I will also read yours if you'd like.

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PaigeStreet replied...
Feb. 2, 2013 at 1:56 pm

Man, you've really got a lot of responses, so I don't really expect you to read any of mine, but it would be really cool if you did. Any of them would be cool. 

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jonpettigrew replied...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 2:19 am

I would love some feedback

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Kris_10 replied...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 3:11 pm

Could you please read/review my haiku ignite me? Let me know what you think! Thanks!

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