If you dont mind, could you read my Are You Ready? poem and give me feedback....??
Plz comment and rate and check out my other works
Could you check out this poem before I submit it?
I meet new people every time I open a book cover.
I tear through the pages of their lives
Anxiously uncovering their darkest secrets.
I discover their sorrows and joys.
I empathise with the struggles they overcome.
I become friends with the black ink dancing on the parchment.
I never wish to bid farewell to my new found companions,
but I always reach the lone page that has been waiting to steal
my written family away from me.
Yet to wipe away all the sorrow I must only open another book cover.
Could you please read and comment on my articles My Imagination and/or The Author? Thank you!
@Sparkle: Your song lyrics, "Leave and leave my heart behind" are phenomenal! I love how poetic and smooth the lines are written, and I can seriously hear this song broadcasting on the radio. Great job. Add some more metaphors if you're craving a little more zing. (:
Hi! Looks like you have a lot of requests, but if you get an opportunity would you mind checking out one of my poems? They're all super short, if that helps :P
Well of course I would love you to read my stuff!! But I will also read yours if you'd like.
Man, you've really got a lot of responses, so I don't really expect you to read any of mine, but it would be really cool if you did. Any of them would be cool.
I would love some feedback
Could you please read/review my haiku ignite me? Let me know what you think! Thanks!