Nov. 4, 2012 at 1:39 pm
Hey, so here's the scoop. I'll read over any of your work, and comment/rate as you wish! (:
Thank you!
Nov. 4, 2012 at 10:08 pm
I feel like this is going to turn into a mafia situation real fast, but oh well. Check out my poem "Required For The FCAT" when you get a chance. I'd appreciate any thoughts you have on it.
Nov. 6, 2012 at 7:50 am
Hopefully you get the chance, can you read "Not Black"? I'd really like some healthy feedback ^.^ Thanks
Nov. 6, 2012 at 10:39 am
Hey! When you get the chance, would you look at one of my poems? Doesn't matter which one. Thanks! :)
Nov. 7, 2012 at 5:39 pm
Would it be possible for you to check out one of my poems? I'm new here, and I could really use the feedback! Thank you SO much in advance!
Nov. 9, 2012 at 5:21 pm
If you have the time, could you read mine? Thanks so much!
Nov. 9, 2012 at 10:14 pm
Can you read mine it doesn't matter which one(s)
Nov. 26, 2012 at 11:16 pm
Thanks! Can you give feed back on the poem i wrote "Inside the Body"?
Nov. 27, 2012 at 4:43 am
woah, too good to pass up. I'd love any input/reactions you have on *any* of my work. I'm about to check out yours, too!
Nov. 27, 2012 at 2:22 pm
I'd love the feedback too. =D Finally someone's volunteered to read if I present my stuff. Read *Incomplete verses* or else *The fruit of Altruism* whenever you're willing too. Will really appreciate that! :D
Nov. 27, 2012 at 6:40 pm
HEYYYYY check out any of my poems rate/comment/both f you please! ;) :) please, and thank you :D
Nov. 27, 2012 at 7:55 pm
Wow, haha thanks!
Nov. 27, 2012 at 7:59 pm
Wow...this is something else... well then please look up my work.any is fine. And you can be brutally honest as i want to improve my writing!
Nov. 28, 2012 at 8:23 pm
Check out my stuff pleaseee. I would really appreciate your opinion! Thanks.
http://www.teenink.com/mystuff.php?act=mywork
Nov. 30, 2012 at 11:38 am
I would realy appreciate it if you checked out some of my poems please. thnx:)
Nov. 30, 2012 at 4:08 pm
I just love it when people say they are willing to give feedback! Thanks!
I have a poem called Like BIrds that was recently posted. Would you like to take a look at it?
If you enjoy it, I have lots of other pieces.
Thanks again!
Nov. 30, 2012 at 6:08 pm
I believe I have. You're doing a great job.
Dec. 2, 2012 at 4:25 pm
I just got several new poems posted. Any (or a couple) of them would be fantastic! Thank you!!!
Dec. 2, 2012 at 9:32 pm
Thank you so much for your comments. You made me feel very good. Anything of yours I should read?
:)
Dec. 4, 2012 at 9:11 pm
@KnitsandPurls: Thanks haha, but the forum's called "free feedback". Your choice, though. It's very sweet of you. If you read something, read my poem called All They Laugh At. It was number one in ballad section yesterday!! (: