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jettabugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Nov. 4, 2012 at 1:39 pm

Hey, so here's the scoop. I'll read over any of your work, and comment/rate as you wish! (:
Thank you!

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AnthonyDavidHall replied...
Nov. 4, 2012 at 10:08 pm

I feel like this is going to turn into a mafia situation real fast, but oh well. Check out my poem "Required For The FCAT" when you get a chance. I'd appreciate any thoughts you have on it.

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Beeprii replied...
Nov. 6, 2012 at 7:50 am

Hopefully you get the chance, can you read "Not Black"? I'd really like some healthy feedback ^.^ Thanks

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fluterocker015This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 6, 2012 at 10:39 am

Hey! When you get the chance, would you look at one of my poems? Doesn't matter which one. Thanks! :)

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theloverofbooksThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 7, 2012 at 5:39 pm

Would it be possible for you to check out one of my poems? I'm new here, and I could really use the feedback! Thank you SO much in advance!

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Claudia.VII replied...
Nov. 9, 2012 at 5:21 pm

If you have the time, could you read mine? Thanks so much!

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Sharkgirl replied...
Nov. 9, 2012 at 10:14 pm

Can you read mine it doesn't matter which one(s)

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Nov. 26, 2012 at 11:16 pm

Thanks! Can you give feed back on the poem i wrote "Inside the Body"?

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PaigeStreet replied...
Nov. 27, 2012 at 4:43 am

woah, too good to pass up. I'd love any input/reactions you have on *any* of my work. I'm about to check out yours, too!

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KeishaLouise15 replied...
Nov. 27, 2012 at 6:40 pm

HEYYYYY check out any of my poems rate/comment/both f you please! ;) :) please, and thank you :D

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taylorbugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 27, 2012 at 7:55 pm

Wow, haha thanks!

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nakoLa replied...
Nov. 27, 2012 at 7:59 pm

Wow...this is something else... well then please look up my work.any is fine. And you can be brutally honest as i want to improve my writing!

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kallieisawesome replied...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 8:23 pm

Check out my stuff pleaseee. I would really appreciate your opinion! Thanks.
TeenInk.com/mystuff.php?act=mywork

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ILuvBritishBoys replied...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 11:38 am

I would realy appreciate it if you checked out some of my poems please. thnx:)

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KnitsandPurls replied...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 4:08 pm

I just love it when people say they are willing to give feedback! Thanks!
I have a poem called Like BIrds that was recently posted. Would you like to take a look at it? 
If you enjoy it, I have lots of other pieces.
Thanks again!

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jetta.bugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 6:08 pm

I believe I have. You're doing a great job.

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paige14 replied...
Dec. 2, 2012 at 4:25 pm

I just got several new poems posted. Any (or a couple) of them would be fantastic! Thank you!!!

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KnitsandPurls replied...
Dec. 2, 2012 at 9:32 pm

Thank you so much for your comments.  You made me feel very good. Anything of yours I should read?
:)

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jetta.bugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 9:11 pm

@KnitsandPurls: Thanks haha, but the forum's called "free feedback". Your choice, though. It's very sweet of you. If you read something, read my poem called All They Laugh At. It was number one in ballad section yesterday!! (:

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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 9:57 pm

Check out any of my work :) 
Here is one of my song lyrics 
 
Leave and leave my heart behind
An eye for an eye; a soul for a soul
 A heart for a heart?
You stole my heart like a baby in the night.
You squeezed all the love out drop by drop
Please let me beg you, give my heart a break.
Even with control of me you will never get what you truly desire.
My love…
You want whatever you can’t have.
You crave whatever’s blocked
You ache for everything desired
But baby please forget about my heart.
You know I don’t love, and I know you don’t love
So leave and leave my heart with me.
You, take, take, take
I’m on my knees, knees, knees
Begging you please, please, please
Just end this horror now.
I give up, surrender, and count me out.
I died within, you tore me up, and you left my brokenness behind.
You want whatever you can’t have
You crave whatever’s blocked
 You ache for everything desired
But baby please forget about my heart.
So leave and leave my heart behind

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