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A Beautiful Demise

Raylyn B. posted this thread...
Oct. 7, 2012 at 10:26 pm

I know we're living in this world of violence;
Your background is vicously astounding
Commit me in your precious life
I'll show you a bright light
Me and you together will have a beautiful demise
Can a demise ever be beautiful
Or dreadful and mournful
But our love is so strong
It's so heavenly the angels harmony
They're singing
When our intimacy is embracing
Our love is foreverly remembered
I'm the one that will be the one who you believe
The one you fantasize before you sleep
The one that will be the first
To carry your seed
I know how to play my cards
Because I'm the one that stole your heart
You never spoke lies
But it was just your emotions
You've tried to hide
Guess you can say 
We were disguise as Bonnie & Clyde
It was heaven sent
You were a less romantic
But you yearn for my affection
Was so promiscously threatened
But to me it was passion
That It just had to happened
I was derranged in these promiscous fixactions
It was only a matter of time
That I've had cried
Do I mean more than a kiss
Or revive me from my casket
That our demise is so beautiful
That it can never be forgetful

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Oct. 8, 2012 at 12:05 am

Im not too clear as to what your message is, could you make it clear to me?

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AlidaHope replied...
Oct. 8, 2012 at 12:26 am

I found that very beautiful and intimit. I felt the emotion within every line written, Beautiful.

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