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Oct. 5, 2012 at 6:03 pm

I look death in the eye
I dare him to take me
He is waiting.
 
I looked down at the ground
I felt the devil shiver in fear
I am at my end.
 
I will not go without a fight
 
Today is my last day
And tonight
I say good bye.
 
At first there was anger
Then there was disbelief
Now it’s just acceptance.
 
There will be no more second chances
No more fond memories
Because I am a dead girl walking.
 
My stomach rumbles
Food won’t do me any good
Who needs fuel to die?
 
My hands shake
My will shatters
But becomes whole again.
 
Tomorrow morning
The world will go on
Without me.

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AnnaReadThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 8, 2012 at 1:35 pm

This is beautiful and heartwrenching.  I love your word choice and the way you convey emotion.  Keep writing!

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SuNshiNe007This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 10, 2012 at 11:14 am

This is beautiful, great job. I also love your word choices. You are a talented writer ;) keep it up!

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Deezy204 replied...
Oct. 12, 2012 at 2:00 pm

This is absolutely stunning! You're very talented. 

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LoveAndHateMakeLife replied...
Oct. 16, 2012 at 2:40 am

Awesome message at the end. It really tells a story, and that means the world to me. I can picture what is happening, a very clear mental image. Loved it.

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