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A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Sept. 26, 2012 at 1:37 pm

This city grieves in unison.
As everything falls apart
No one blinks or even breathes.
A word about the fear that grips their hearts.

We're all dead inside.
We just never learn.
Nothing left to do.
But ignight the fire.
and watch it burn.

We see in shades of black and grey.
Unconcerned for the bleeding hearts.
This world grows colder every day.
Don't tell me how to live this way.

They built these walls to keep us safe.
Or so they say.
This place is just another prison.
To keep us in our place.

There's no escape.

Yet here we slowly die.
And theres nothing left to say.
We just keep swallowing their lies.
And pretending we're okay.

We're all dead inside.
We just never learn.
Nothing left to do.
But ignight the fire.
And watch it burn.

So tired of feeling helpless.
So tired of this regime.
So tired of being controlled by the selfish.
While the rest just plot and scheme.

We need a revolution.
yeah we need another song.
Because in this world of seclusion
We've lost our sense of right and wrong.

We're all dead inside.
We just never learn.
Nothing left do.
But ignight the fire.
And watch it burn.

Yeah I'm going to watch you burn.

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SuNshiNe007 replied...
Sept. 27, 2012 at 8:12 am

Wow, I really like this! And it is so true. You are a very talented song writer. I am right this is a song right? Keep up the amazing work!

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A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 27, 2012 at 2:00 pm

Thanks Sunshine! Yeah its a song. I kinda decided id experiment by adding a chorus in this one

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SuNshiNe007 replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 8:33 am

Well it sounds good, and your very welcome ;)

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A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 11:10 am

I cant wait to figure out the sound for this one though. I always wanted a band with an old linkin park type sound. XD that'd be so awesome.

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SuNshiNe007 replied...
Oct. 4, 2012 at 8:13 am

Lol, That would be really awsome! Good luck, hope you figure it out ;)

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A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 10, 2012 at 11:29 am

Yeah I might have to put my music on the back burner for abit while I figure things out with school n stuff though.

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SuNshiNe007 replied...
Oct. 16, 2012 at 9:13 am

Ohh.. Well Ill be waitin then if you have to do that, good luck.

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SuNshiNe007 replied...
Oct. 16, 2012 at 9:13 am

Ohh.. Well Ill be waitin then if you have to do that, good luck.

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A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 16, 2012 at 8:36 pm

Actually were almost done with our first cd. I'll probably take a break for abit once its done.

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SuNshiNe007 replied...
Oct. 18, 2012 at 8:18 am

Thats awsome! :)

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VaulterBro17 replied...
Oct. 22, 2012 at 12:01 am

I love your writing!!

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SuNshiNe007 replied...
Oct. 24, 2012 at 2:18 pm

Hey can you please read my new poem, "A Flaming Ball of Warmth" ? :D I am so excited about this one!! Please read and comment on it if you will!!! And anyone else who wants to too!

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SuNshiNe007 replied...
Oct. 24, 2012 at 2:18 pm

Hey can you please read my new poem, "A Flaming Ball of Warmth" ? :D I am so excited about this one!! Please read and comment on it if you will!!! And anyone else who wants to too!

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A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 25, 2012 at 4:06 pm

Thank you Vaulter! and yeah of course I will sunshine !

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