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xXx_Fox_xXx posted this thread...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 3:15 pm

Close my eyes,
Listening to the soft pelting,
Of angel tears on my window,
An endless rolling of God's drum,
Bright flashes of beauty,
Here I am,
Listening,
Waiting,
Watcjing,
Wondering,
When will it end?
When will this pain I feel end?
The tears of the angels bring my own,
The defening sound of the drum makes my heart wild,
The flashes bring fear into my entire being,
Beautifully daunting,
This thing ruins me,
Every time,
Here I am,
Afraid,
Unsure,
Impatient,
Lost,
Unforgiven,
With frsh tears welling up,
i lie on my bed in wait,
My eye lids grow heavy,
This pain is necessary,
To ease the guilt,
I must face what I've done,
The tears,
The sadness,
The fear,
I need it,
because I deserve it,
Here I am,
suffering with due cause

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LovetoHate replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 3:51 pm

very nice
 

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xXx_Fox_xXx replied...
Sept. 25, 2012 at 4:41 pm

Thank you!
 

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LovetoHate replied...
Sept. 25, 2012 at 4:46 pm

No Problem!

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Sept. 25, 2012 at 5:48 pm

it was a very inspirational lyris but i hope you feel ok

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xXx_Fox_xXx replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 11:14 am

Oh no i'm fine! thanks for asking, they arne't lyrics just a free verse about my fear of thunder ^^' sorry for the worry

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A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 11:24 am

I liked it alot, for some reason it reminded me of a song I like even though it doesnt sound anything like it lol. Anyway! I can't write without rhyming at every other line or so lol.But you did it well.

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xXx_Fox_xXx replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 11:39 am

Oh no i'm fine! thanks for asking, they arne't lyrics just a free verse about my fear of thunder ^^' sorry for the worry

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A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 11:43 am

Errr what? you said that already. lmao

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A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 11:43 am

Errr what? you said that already. lmao

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xXx_Fox_xXx replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 12:30 pm

urgh sorry teenink was being mean (_ _) what song was it?

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A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 12:32 pm

new divide by linkin park. lol ik it did that to me too. Anyway, idk why it reminded me of that but it did XD

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xXx_Fox_xXx replied...
Dec. 6, 2012 at 2:19 pm

*bump*....

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iam4evermyself replied...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 7:39 pm

Love how it's so strong and power ful and amazing. I feel a strong sense of emotion reading it.

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