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Sept. 21, 2012 at 10:30 am
Not afraid
like i may seem sometimes
but you dont know what you can't see
only my true friends know
the weakness i contain
but
i am
not afraid
because they are always
able to stand up for me
& i for them
not afraid
i am not afriad to
be happy or to
be myself
becasue they don't judge
i am
NOT AFRAID
Sept. 21, 2012 at 3:20 pm
it seems a bit scattered, maybe its the way its spaced, I like the message youre trying to send though
Oct. 1, 2012 at 10:01 am
thank you yeah i did a lot if spacing in this one i will try not to do that anymore so that no one gets confused thank u for the advise :)
Oct. 1, 2012 at 11:11 am
this is good. but i agree, you do need to look at the spacing. other than that, it's good :)
Oct. 5, 2012 at 9:49 am
okay i will start doing so thank you for pointing that out for me
