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SuNshiNe007 posted this thread...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 8:22 am

Somewhere inside me it’s dark and cold
But lately you have unraveled a spark
It’s a spark that warmth once again flows
It’s what I needed to bring the light and chase away the cold.
 
You are like a blessing to me
You are my shining star that never seems to fade away
And I am thankful for your touch and love-
I am thankful for your grace
 
There is a dark side in me though
And I hope I will never have to travel there again.
I hope you’ll stay and wash it all away
Then maybe my fate will eventually change.
 
There can only be hope though for now
For I never know what tomorrow may bring to me
Will it be light or pain?
Will my fate ever cede away?
 
I just hope and pray you will continue to love me the same
I hope my dark side will not destroy you and me.
My life is incomplete without you
You are like the lamp when my day is nothing but a shadow.

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A_Fate_Unknown replied...
Sept. 26, 2012 at 11:29 am

This ones awesome Tamara. It's nice to see you posting something happy. :D

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SuNshiNe007 replied...
Sept. 27, 2012 at 8:07 am

Wow, Thanks :) Yea, I'd say it is a bit of a change..

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A_Fate_Unknown replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 11:05 am

It's cool though because It says you have this dark side in it and in the title i was expecting it to be much darker, but It also has a sense of happiness about it that I really like.

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SuNshiNe007 replied...
Oct. 4, 2012 at 8:03 am

Yea, I noticed that too. I think this is one of my better pieces :) I really like it too.

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Zaylie replied...
Nov. 13, 2012 at 10:38 pm

SuN I've missed your writing so much!!!!! lol. It's great and it is a bit of a change. But it's a wonderful one. I'm back for a bit. Hopefully I can post something everyonce in a long while. So check out my thread again.
 
And keep writing, because I'll keep reading it all. Miss u.
 
-Zaylie-

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SuNshiNe007 replied...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 9:11 am

Zaylie!! Oh wow I have missed you too!! I wish I had your number or something.. I love your writings I have been so busy lately though.. I will always keep writing!
~Sunshine~

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jkiener7646 replied...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 8:18 am

That is awesome :) I usually write dark poetry because i write when im depressed it helps me. Continue writing it is fabulous.

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iam4evermyself replied...
Dec. 9, 2012 at 4:47 pm

It's amazing. I love it. Man, i wish i could have the creative mind lke you do. KEEP U THE GOOD WORK> :)

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Tusillody replied...
Dec. 10, 2012 at 4:34 am

This is awesome!

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SuNshiNe007 replied...
Jan. 7, 2013 at 11:32 am

Wow thanks y'all!! :D And I shall always write poems and such!! Have a great day everyone!!

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