he walks in

January 4, 2012
By lovely-esca GOLD, Simpsonville, South Carolina
lovely-esca GOLD, Simpsonville, South Carolina
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He turned the key in the lock and opened the door. To his disbelieve he saw his girl friend Tina drenched in blood. Her face had been fairly beaten in with dry blood covering half of her face. Knife marks in her back with wet warm blood gusting out. He, Mario was shocked to find the one he loved murder.

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just a little bit of something i started.

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