The Loneliest Whale

April 25, 2012
By Autumn5100 PLATINUM, Islamabad, Other
Autumn5100 PLATINUM, Islamabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
All good things must come to an end.


Girl: Do you know about Alice?

Boy: The girl from twilight?

Girl: No, the loneliest whale in the world

Boy: What?

Girl: Alice isn’t like the others. While all the other Baleen whales communicate at 15 hertz, she speaks at 52 Hertz, scaring all the other whales away

Boy: Sad

Girl: She doesn’t even follow the same migration patter as the others; she just roams the ocean singing a sad love song.

Boy: Why?

Girl: She’s different.

Boy: She’s lucky.

Girl: How is she lucky? She wanders alone in the ocean, without anyone.

Boy: She’s different, not many people are.

Girl: People can’t be compared to whales.

Boy: Why not?

Girl: Because Alice scares the others away because of her voice, because she cant communicate with them. Whales can’t be expected to show love and understanding. People can.

Boy: But do they? Humans aren’t accepting either. If something scares them, if something is different, most humans will also keep their distance.

Girl: But there’s love. Humans know how to love.

Boy: You don’t think whales can love?

Girl: I don’t know.

Boy: How do you know she’s not out there looking for someone just liker her, the love of her life?

Girl: Because she hasn’t found him yet.

Boy: Love requires patience.

Girl: Why don’t they call out to each other?

Boy: Maybe her lover can’t communicate with her.

Girl: How can he love her if he can’t talk to her, if he can’t understand her?

Boy: Because love can’t be confined to words.

Girl: Then how did they fall in love?

Boy: He fell for her and wooed her until she fell for him, just like I did with you.

Girl: Now you’re saving her lover exists and is out there?

Boy: He must.

Girl: Why?

Boy: Because every unique individual has someone deeply in love with them.

Girl: Then where is he?

Boy: They fought and lost each other in the dark. They couldn’t communicate and swam too far away. Now they look for each other, wanting to repent.

Girl: They lost each other because of a fight?

Boy: Anger makes you suffer.

Girl: Promise me, we will never fight.

Boy: We will always fight

Girl: But…

Boy: But we will never let go of each other because we can communicate. Even if we can’t understand each other all the time, we can always make each other understand.

Girl: We’ll make it through?

Boy: Alice will find her love and I will always love you my dear

Girl: Did you know some whales commit suicide?

Boy: No, fortunately I didn’t know that.



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houston SILVER said...
on Jan. 18 2015 at 11:33 am
houston SILVER, Joburg, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I don't know about life, there is too much to it...

I loved how unique and smart this is! keep writing more things like this! i want to find out what happens next.

Camer16 BRONZE said...
on May. 3 2014 at 6:37 pm
Camer16 BRONZE, Cumberland, Rhode Island
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I like how you turned such a simple topic, a lonely baleen whale, into a skit with a powerful meaning about love and human spirit.

on Oct. 30 2013 at 9:53 am
Demoderby PLATINUM, Pontiac, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
All that we see or dream is but a dream within a dream
-Edgar Allen Poe

:} its... its... *tears up* SO BEAUTIFUL!!! I loved it! It was really nice... and I love whales, and how the message was interprated with the whales... WOW. I loved it so much.   Check out my stuff sometime and comment what you think about them. ;)

on Aug. 14 2013 at 7:06 pm
dejarenee SILVER, Goose Creek, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Write to Liberate"

I like the usage of the whales in your story. the story overall had a great message

on Jul. 13 2013 at 4:24 am
Melancholy.Musings.of.a.Silly.Girl. PLATINUM, Islamabad, Other
21 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I tell you that there are terrible temptations that it requires strength, strength and courage, to yeild to."- Oscar Wilde, An Ideal Husband.

Its beautiful.

on Mar. 5 2013 at 10:49 am
CourtneyLanier BRONZE, Kings Mountain, North Carolina
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It got interesting later on, but it got my attention. i really enjoyed the story, it really reminded me of life in a way.

ZooAdnan said...
on Jun. 20 2012 at 8:25 am
ZooAdnan, Islamabad, New York
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Thanks sooo much :)

Dynamo DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 11 2012 at 5:31 am
Dynamo DIAMOND, Lahore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I used to think falling in love would be personal. But it's all a big public show.

Although the theme is a bit morose, yet it is interesting, it draws the reader in the scene. But love cannot be treated on superficial borders only; love is boundless, and if i be a bit candid, exposed. Anyway, nice read.

on May. 29 2012 at 11:36 am
Autumn5100 PLATINUM, Islamabad, Other
34 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
All good things must come to an end.

Thank you :]

on May. 29 2012 at 11:35 am
Autumn5100 PLATINUM, Islamabad, Other
34 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
All good things must come to an end.

Thank you :]

on May. 29 2012 at 11:35 am
Autumn5100 PLATINUM, Islamabad, Other
34 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
All good things must come to an end.

No youre not :P

 

Just the ending :P


on Apr. 30 2012 at 7:18 am

Nice but sad

true love is blind to all thing


EmoDonky said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 4:40 am
EmoDonky, Gothem, Arizona
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Entertaining little read :) Odd twist at the end :3

Cherrie said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 3:54 am
the ending's a little abrupt..try to end it a little more smoothly. but a great read overall ^_^

on Apr. 30 2012 at 3:53 am
not sure if my comment sent or if i sent it to the wrong person....

on Apr. 30 2012 at 3:52 am
it was interesting,i think it shows truth,i would speck but when i do people tent to not understand my fool meaning so i shall not speak to long.it shows and interesting story between to lovers stating that they will be together, and i like,the ending through me off abit but it was a change in pace

RedDawn said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 3:45 am
This is really good, and I really like the message it's sending.

Hyuu said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 3:45 am
So cool :)

Ascension said...
on Apr. 29 2012 at 12:57 pm
Ascension, Harrisburg, Pennsylvania
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I enjoy this very much. The underlying message speaks volumes.

ZooAdnan said...
on Apr. 29 2012 at 12:46 pm
ZooAdnan, Islamabad, New York
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I found it enlightening... :|


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