I am a girl of 14 years old, I was walking with a group of my friends when I man and his small family pulls up and says “I’m James; this is my glorious wife Amanda and our son Max. Would you children like a ride?” Right away I feel uneasy but my friends pull me along and we get in the car. My boyfriend reads my expression and holds my hand telling me we’re fine. Then we all fall asleep except the man, his wife, and their son. Then I wake up in a small dark room. Even with the lack of light I can see…….and feel……and smell. I feel pain from everywhere on my body and a can see and smell blood everywhere. I’m soaked but not dead I should have bled out by now, there’s a river of blood around me. With all the pain I feel I still have many questions but the one that bugs me the most is “how the hell I’m I still alive?” then I realize it’s not my blood that I see. There’s a familiar face across the small dark room, a girl…..dead. I can’t be sure if I know her, there’s blood all over her and I scream at the sight of her guts splattered everywhere, I’m terrified at this point. I scream for help but either no one hears me or they ignore my plead. Suddenly a bright light flashes on and a tall shinny man with a blood soaked knife is standing across the room, watching me with a creepy smile. I know his face and it’s the man named James. I scream, “Where are my friends…..Brad, Cindy, Kevin? He replies. Dead! Except your little boyfriend, Brad. But my wonderful Amanda should be finished with him soon.” “Leave him alone you freak” I scream. I can’t, he’s my wife’s now. I burst into tears, screaming BRAD WHERE ARE YOU? Then I hear Brad next to me in the corner “Marry, I’m here with you. I run to him and hug and kiss him all over. James starts to walk towards us then picks up the head of the girl, I know who she is now and with fresh tears I weep “Cindy.” James leaves the room with Cindy’s head.
Brad gets up and hugs me “we have to get out of here.”
Brad: I don’t know.
Brad: (looking around) what?
Marry: I’m scared
Brad: me too.
Marry: over there I yell, there’s a vent. Let’s go!
Brad: Damn, I love you!
The two run to the vent and find another body. The body of Kevin, another friend. This one looks different, no blood and it doesn’t look real but he has been strangled.
Marry: Oh my god
Brad: (moving the body) sorry bro but we got to get out of here.
They climb in the vent that smells like rotting flesh. They see light at the end at fill with hope and they crawl and are in another room.
Brad: (to Marry) are you ok?
Someone walks in the room and they hide. It’s Amanda and she’s covered in blood. She sees Brad and Marry then she smiles.
Amanda: (soft and sweet) Children don’t be scared. I won’t hurt you.
Marry: (Angry) you lying b****. You killed our friends. You chopped up Cindy and strangled Kevin.
Amanda: (Angry) NO! That was my husband.
Brad: (soft) you could have stopped him!
Amanda: (trembling voice) No I couldn’t. He’s evil. He forced our marriage. I’m a slave to him.
Marry: (desperate) Help us.
Amanda: (bold) I will.
Brad: (happy) thanks
Marry: (nervous) how do we get out?
Amanda: (emotionless) you can’t.
Marry: (confusion) what? I thought you were going to help us.
Amanda: (sad voice) I will but there is no way out. James has the doors and windows locked with the keys on him. There is only one way we can escape, kill James.
Brad: we are only 14. We can’t. (Directing the question to marry) can we?
Marry: (strong voice) we can and we will.
Amanda: (excited) Great! Come on.
The three go to James’s room of torture and he sees them.
James: (fake confusion) what is this? My own bride against me. Never!
Amanda: (slightly crying) I’m sorry darling but this is insane. You killed so many. It stops NOW!
James: (emotionless) as you wish, my love
Amanda: (anger in her voice) don’t call me that. I despise you.
James: (slightly surprised) you do? I had no idea.
Brad: (bravery in his voice) whatever. Time to die.
Marry: (agreeing) yes
Amanda: (agreeing) yes
All three fun up to the man with knifes and he jumps into the air, hovering.
Brad: (confusion) how are you doing that?
James: (thick voice) you can’t kill me. I am a magical being. You will all dies painfully for this. Amanda! You will die slowly with my pleasure….my love.
Amanda: (pure hatred) F*** you!
Marry: (sadness) Brad, what now?
Brad: (sadness) I don’t know.
All is quiet. They are lost. Them James falls to the ground….hard.
Brad: (confused) what happened?
Marry: (also confused) I’m not sure
Amanda: (running to her dead husband) he has been stabbed.
Marry: (looking around surprised) by who?
Amanda: (emotionless) my son, Max.
Brad: (grabbing Marry) we’re leaving.
Marry: (breaking free of Brad’s grip) wait!
Brad: (surprised) what?
Marry: (running up to James, grabbing the keys. Then turns to face Brad, smiling) now let’s leave.
Brad: (looking at Marry) one more thing first.
Marry: (looking back at Brad) what?
Brad grabs the blood soaked Marry and kisses her with passion and force on her lips. They kiss for a long time then stop, look at each other with huge smiles.
Brad: (happy) I love you Marry.
Marry: (happy) I love you Brad.
They leave the dead James, his crying wife Amanda, and there hero, Max. They leave holding hands thinking about what they’re going to tell everyone. They are still smiling, happy to be alive and with the ones they love.